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Redemption

Redemption As raging seas reach a blustering boil Gloomy, dark clouds construct a squall Her eyes appear as furious fire Stubbornly oblivious, to it all So harshly evicted from her home Burned into her a symbol and shamed For an evil bed of lies thrown forth By he who's love, was once acclaimed With a loaded musket, by her side She prays her aim to be most true Redemption in the form of blood His demise, and naught else would do He selfishly counts his ill gained bounty As she gives her wolf partner a nod Her assailants demeanor will rightly change When she exposes his blood and facade!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/12/2018 3:42:00 PM
So you have a dark side, intriguing...
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/12/2018 10:36:00 PM
I went on a diet for half a day and this happened! Well, obviously the diet is over!!.............80)
Date: 10/9/2018 6:23:00 PM
Wow! Don't get on her bad side!!! Enjoyed a sort of wild west flavor in this.
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/10/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thanks! This was totally inspired by the picture and obviously a departure from the norm for me. Anyway, thanks for commenting!...............pat

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