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Red Sun

soaring high huge fireball taste of cinnamon the red sun...rising...a bull’s cape the yellow sky and the peppermint grass, in variance huge countenance, with goose-eyes and snowy-cloud beard yellow oozes red leaks into rivers and creeks like a colored pen...liberating ink click of Spring blossoming with blue hills and tangerine wings lavalike falls of grace transfixed by the only sun 2/4/2018

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Date: 2/7/2018 8:06:00 AM
This one really resonated with me Kim, Beautiful imagery, especially ' taste of cinnamon" xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :) Kim
Date: 2/5/2018 3:31:00 AM
Your imagery and use of colour is divine Kim:-) Such a vivid descriptive poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2018 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! :)
Date: 2/4/2018 9:01:00 PM
Colourful imagery reflects our common longing for spring. Well penned, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2018 6:43:00 AM
So true! At this juncture we long for all that the sun is...the warmth, warm colors, and even taste. Thanks, Line!
Date: 2/4/2018 7:11:00 PM
This is so full of vibrant colour and seasonal life, love this one, great write Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis! I own this one painting that has given me tons of inspiration! Blessings!

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