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RED ROSE RULES ~anacreontic verse~ Guard by blue skies on green meadows the lover's roll, a dash of love cause cheeks to blush a classic style, a charming act from nature's art-- to tease her mind, to please her heart. Her smile so bright, he want this right: the scents so pure among all blooms his red rose rules freed from fear shy lips reveal thoughts long hidden from her muse. Eyes wide open hands to her face casting same spell, orbs magnetize on feelings so bliss. They don't want to miss, they start to kiss only the breeze, the birds, the trees witness this tryst. _____________________________ 8:14 pm; January 06, 2015

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:22:00 PM
Olive, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/20/2016 11:49:00 AM
soo well done, eloi.. huge congrats!..huggs
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Date: 1/20/2016 4:49:00 AM
How lovely Olive.. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:33:00 PM
This makes my heart beat a little faster. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:23:00 PM
Olive,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat...
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:20:00 PM
absolutely breathtaking Olive I think young James inspired this gem of a poem:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:44:00 PM
Well done and congrats on your win. Thank you for entering :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:46:00 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:53:00 PM
ahhh, is this you with James!! I bet he inspires many of your charming romantic poems these days!!
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Date: 1/8/2016 5:19:00 PM
This is lovely Olive_eloi! No wonder he falls for his special red rose who attracts with her beauty and attraction. ~ I hope that she did not ruffle her petals:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/19/2016 10:15:00 AM
Weeeee...back with merited congratulations on this podium finish, Olive_eloi! ~~ paul
Date: 1/8/2016 1:35:00 PM
VERY EXPRESSIVE AND CREATIVE WORK..IF FOR A CONTEST, SHOULD BE IN THE WINNER'S LINE UP..THANKS FOR DROPPING BY..SARA
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:47:00 PM
Your words flow Olive as beautiful as the Roses petals are caressed by a Summer breeze. The more one reads, the more stunning it becomes. To my fav's it goes ~~ hugs & smiles aplenty ~~ James xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2016 8:41:00 PM
James, thanks much for adding it to your faves.. =`)~~~~hugs and more soon, Olive Eloisa =`)
Date: 1/6/2016 4:37:00 PM
beautiful write Olive...
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Date: 1/6/2016 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful flow Olive, wonderful write...*smiles*
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Date: 1/6/2016 11:28:00 AM
- So lovely written, dear Olive ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:45:00 AM
Oh yes truly an amazing poem, the flow of superb,
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/4/2016 9:41:00 PM
thank you so much HArry.. =`) I'm glad you like it.. =`)
Date: 1/6/2016 8:31:00 AM
Amazing write, Olive. Thanks for sharing the delight of your pen
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 3:24:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. =`) weeeeee, I just made the rose a symbol here.. =`)

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