Red Hair

Her hair a bright red
In the autumn of her life
Wind blew through strands shed

Soon winter will come with white
Coating auburn hair 'pon ground

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 19, 2012 at 7:16 AM

Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Sara. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

Gail Debole

October 18, 2012 at 8:38 AM

Hi Sara - Very strong imagery and your use of alliteration gave me a mental pop today. Even though you refer to seasons, I keep thinking that you are describing mother nature. Many thanks for your comment about my poem. - Gail

Bl Devnath

October 14, 2012 at 6:53 PM

Nice imagery. Loved the picture of autumn. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

October 13, 2012 at 1:08 AM

Yes, you paint a great picture of autumn turning into the winter here, Sara.

Christopher Flaherty

October 12, 2012 at 3:24 PM

Good Evening Sara Red hair equals passion and fire and the leaves of autumn 'pon ground. Cheers

Vesna Kovrlija

October 12, 2012 at 10:31 AM

Winter can blow through our hairs, but we must not let it blow through our hearts. Beautiful poem!

Brandi Simpson

October 11, 2012 at 9:17 PM

Love this poem, Sara. A beautiful visual.

Russell Sivey

October 11, 2012 at 5:36 PM

This is quite the wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed this fully delightful poem, one of magnificence and awe! This piece is spellbinding, Great Work!!