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Red Flowers From My Love

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Summertime lover I'm waiting at the station; Strawberry evening! Anticipation heartbeat, like rainbow glimpsed from a street. Dusky moments fly like dense willows in wild wind, in the moss green spring. Then a train roars like thunder Scent blooms 'neath stars of slumber.

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 2/13/2024 12:07:00 AM

this is an awesome write many blessings

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/13/2024 1:26:00 PM

I appreciate your kind remarks so much, Yolanda. Very best wishes.

Karen Jones

Date: 1/22/2024 11:56:00 PM

This is beautiful Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/23/2024 12:22:00 PM

Deepest thanks, Karen. :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/19/2024 2:52:00 PM

Poetic excellence. I felt anticipation for a train arrival. Great descriptive writing.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2024 5:17:00 PM

It's so nice to know this poem had sensory appeal for you. Thank you very much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2024 1:48:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write/picture... Have a wonderful day.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2024 5:12:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Have a nice weekend.

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/19/2024 7:55:00 AM

you are just inspiring real poetry,a jewel, yann

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2024 5:11:00 PM

Deepest thanks, Yann.

Silent One

Date: 1/18/2024 12:35:00 PM

Lovely imagery as always..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2024 4:21:00 PM

Your uplifting compliment is greatly appreciated.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/18/2024 7:09:00 AM

Strawberry evening! Anticipation heartbeat---words that hug love! Lovely write, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2024 4:18:00 PM

Your remarks are very pleasant to read, Vijay. Thank you so much. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2024 2:22:00 AM

I used to love trains (alas no travel for me now) The ending is so colorful.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2024 4:13:00 PM

I have family members who worked on the railroad. So glad you enjoyed this. Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2024 8:35:00 PM

Love it and the end is striking! Hugs ~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, dear Kim. Hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/17/2024 6:18:00 PM

lovely imagery in this retro train-arrival scene. Lovely, Evelyn. ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/17/2024 8:02:00 PM

Heart-felt thanks, my friend. :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/17/2024 5:34:00 PM

Oh my, how beautifully written tanka poem, I really love your sweet wordplay here, so romantic and enchanting, creating a vibrantly magical aura.. "Strawberry evening" You're a gorgeous storyteller, dear Evelyn.. Even in few lines you've painted a whole wonderful tale.. "Scent blooms 'neath stars of slumber" Woww "rainbow glimpsed from a street", "moss green spring" So artistically crafted dear.. Love this! A fav.. Sending you many best wishes & light!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/17/2024 8:00:00 PM

Thank you for your kind appreciation, my friend. Your remarks are such a thrilling inspiration. Your compliment on my storytelling will be remembered fondly. Thank you also for your fave. Blessings and hugs.