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Red As a Sound

Loud horns are competing with out-of-sync clanging church bells. There is a frantic feeling, anxiety mounting. Stress parades into my mind. My hands are shaking; a buzzer never stops. I am eager to do something. My body is trembling; there is nowhere to hide. Red has found me, with her trill. I begin to wail and keen, wishing the sounds would dissipate but they never do.

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Date: 5/10/2021 8:53:00 AM
Caren, The next sound in a poem, the red shift has arrived. Still much better than plaid. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2021 11:13:00 AM
Plaid is one of my most favorite "colors" actually.
Date: 5/10/2021 12:55:00 AM
Red Alert.....Danger Danger.....Code Red etc... Clever write...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2021 11:13:00 AM
It means "warning! Warning!" in nature I know
Date: 5/9/2021 6:57:00 PM
'Red' is, indeed, awful... Hideous! Good one. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2021 11:14:00 AM
I actually love it, am wearing it now. My father's favorite color.
Date: 5/9/2021 4:56:00 PM
yes, I think if red were a sound, it would be angry, same as "seeing red" Well done
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea I appreciate your visit
Date: 5/9/2021 3:40:00 PM
You have your own unique way with words dear Karen! More power!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you JCB
Date: 5/9/2021 11:18:00 AM
Interesting take on "red," Caren. Nothing is worse than cacophony when you seek peace and quiet. Good writing.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2021 4:29:00 PM
Thank you. Hope your vacation was terrific.

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