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Red-Hot Pick-Up Valentine Day Line

I've bought a whole pound of Red-Hot Candy
If you'd share it with me, would be handy   
      I'd offer a chocolate bar
           But my thoughts have gone ajar
Seeing you draped in curtains organdy

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Heidi Sands Date: 2/3/2024 8:02:00 AM Funny Sara. Congratulations for your win :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/3/2024 9:55:00 AM Why, thank you, Heidi. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K

I Am Anaya Date: 1/29/2024 8:52:00 AM Clever and original. Draped in organdy, big laughs! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/29/2024 11:51:00 AM Thank you, I Am. I appreciate the nice review of my work and glad you got a laugh. Sara K

Suzette Richards Date: 1/29/2024 5:20:00 AM Great image you conjure with this fun Limerick. Sara. Congratulations on your placement. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/29/2024 7:21:00 AM Whoa!! Thank you Suzette for letting me know that it placed. Sara K

David Fisher Date: 1/26/2024 5:26:00 PM Ha-ha, a hot limerick for the season! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/27/2024 4:18:00 AM Thank you, David. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/26/2024 2:14:00 PM LOL...got a real chuckle out of this Sara. :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2024 3:24:00 PM Glad you got to chuckle, Linda..A laugh a day is good for the soul. Sara K

Silent One Date: 1/26/2024 12:41:00 PM Ha good one! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2024 1:29:00 PM Thank you, SO. Glad you liked it. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/26/2024 10:38:00 AM What a fun/cute Limerick write/candy picture. Thanks for the laugh. Looks like we both did this one. "Good Luck"... Did you know, you can put these candies in baked apples when baking them??? Have a fun day writing away......................... Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2024 11:00:00 AM Paula, I have not used them in baked apples. I mostly fry apples now anyway, but I guess you could put them in that. My husband has always liked the red-hots. I used to bake him a chocolate devil's food cake and ice it with chocolate and decorate it with red-hot candy(the kind that was little hearts). We both have diabetes now so we have to lay low on so many items. Sara K

Sotto Poet Date: 1/26/2024 10:07:00 AM Your Limerick exhibits exceptional skills, brilliantly capturing the essence of Valentine's Day, Sara. The vivid imagery of red hot candy and impeccably draped organdy evokes the passion and intensity of a scintillating rendezvous. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2024 10:57:00 AM Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/26/2024 5:11:00 AM Clever limerick. Good think I can't eat sweets. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2024 6:45:00 AM Victor, Red hots are sweet but hot. I have never looked at the ingredients to see if it is cinnamon or if it is actually some type of hot pepper in them. LOL..Yes, we all should leave off most of our sugar even if not diabetic which I am. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds Date: 1/25/2024 5:12:00 PM Red hot candy and organdy drapes, sounds like a fiery date. A great Limerick Sara. Beryl Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2024 4:32:00 AM I guess that could be, Beryl. Your visit is awesome. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/25/2024 1:03:00 PM ooh la la. hot hot hot Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/25/2024 2:36:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. I wonder if we tried being draped in organza drapes would our husbands notice? LOL..Sara K