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Recurring Visit

I had a recurring dream It visited me now and again An elderly lady riding in style In the backseat of a car She caught my eye And held my gaze Locked without words An expressionless glare Familiar eyes yet not a nod I can’t say how many nights I dreamt this dream It was almost haunting Significant by its silence It was all in the eyes One day it dawned on me Her telepathic message Had to do with my breathing Slow and deep Slow and deep It was like an enigma Shared from beyond Slow and deep Slow and deep Like a connection To the other side A secret door submitted on June 9, 2018 for contest AN INNER KNOWING, AN ABSOLUTE FEELING, MY MYSTICAL SOUL SELF sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 6/22/2018 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this intriguing poem. Well done!
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:31:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/20/2018 9:00:00 AM
Great write Line! It lingers on the soul. Well done. Congratulations on a fine win! xomo
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Date: 6/20/2018 10:51:00 PM
Most appreciated, Maureen.
Date: 6/19/2018 10:44:00 PM
Happy for you :)
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:48:00 PM
Thanks, Natasha. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/19/2018 5:56:00 PM
Interesting, great placing.
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Virginia.
Date: 6/19/2018 11:44:00 AM
Congrats line. Tom
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:24:00 AM
Excellent piece as always and very enjoyable read. Congratulations on your win. Faux
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Fauxcroft. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/19/2018 9:44:00 AM
- A mysterious dream Line - Congratulations on your 2 place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine.

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