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His life became part of mine. His story became my story. I felt the pain he endured With great compassion. I understood his reasons; Why vengeance became an Integral part of his life. Why he couldn’t let it go How it sustained him-- Kept him in a lucid state Unaware of how it was Damaging his inner spirit. Slowly, very slowly over The many years that passed He adapted to walk with me, And as grains of sand slip Through a filled hand— Grain by grain, little by little His hatred grew less and less And he began to live his life Out of love, as his vengeance Began to vanish like the few Grains of sand left, abducted By the restless winds of time. He never saw it coming! For Syed Amaan Ahmad's Free Style Contest

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Date: 7/1/2010 12:42:00 PM
The essence of this poem is so wonderful. The inspiring tone shows there is life again, and that one only has to take the initiative to make it work. This is so uplifting and reminds me of a child starting to crawl, then walk, then run. I hoped it came out well in the contest. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 10:11:00 PM
I am sure I"ve seen this one before and I love it , Connie. Now let me go see this soupmail you have for me!
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:32:00 PM
soup mail!
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:34:00 PM
Connie didn't get that soupmail you sent?
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:57:00 PM
really engaging, well done!
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Date: 6/10/2010 4:37:00 PM
beautiful i love the way this one went,, "and the grains of sand slip"-that line was my favorite, enjoyed... smiles:)
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Date: 6/10/2010 4:37:00 PM
And good luck on the contest lol
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