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FORM: Melting Snowball - each line decreases by one word

Feeding feverish angst and muffled rage Ne’er moments asunder of serenity Anticipating looming impending disaster Ghastly cluttered thoughts Mindless chatter Shhh… AP: 1st place 2023 Submitted on March 22, 2019 for contest LATE MAR 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND Originally posted on April 29, 2018

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Date: 3/26/2019 9:11:00 PM
Line, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/27/2019 1:41:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2018 7:27:00 PM
This makes sense in every way to me, backwards, forwards, and upside down, Line. YES! I say YES to your brilliance.
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:11:00 PM
LOL Caren - sometimes I do feel like a 100 watt but most often the power is off.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:28:00 PM
And thus anxiety and anger melt away! With each line down beauty is up : a well constructed poem! Stay bright Line.
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:15:00 PM
ahhh, we really feel that restlessness with this one!!
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:12:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/29/2018 12:54:00 PM
Sounds like impending doom and gloom. Captivating.
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:30:00 PM
Yes, somebody's a bit negative and needs a chill pill. LOL

Book: Reflection on the Important Things