Recalling My Son's Graduation

With your diploma in hand, you stand smiling,

one of one-hundred-thirty-four graduates of law

from Willamette’s Class of 2009

to walk across that stage.


I give a cheer.

Your father, crouched near the front,

is ready with the camera

to capture this moment we have all awaited.


It’s a moment of happiness

for you to recall with satisfaction.

For me, your dad, sister and nephew, here among the throng,

it’s a time of great honor we’ll remember with pride.


Your pathway to this moment has been arduous and long.

We know how you have struggled.

We know what you have lost.

But also, we know what you have won. . .


May you go forth into this world with that same spirit

that won for you, with much hard work, this prize.

May you always be honest, just, and strong. . .

and may all the dreams you’ve dreamed at last be yours.

(currently Jeremy is married with three kids and is serving as an assistant DA
in Oregon. If he can stay with public service three more years, all that money borrowed for law school will be forgiven debt! Fingers crossed!!)

Oct. 18, 2017 For the Parenthood Contest of Silent One
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Ditshwele Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea, a beautiful artwork indeed..
Parmale Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Such adorable write..
Barden Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Andrea - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
Kimathi Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Greetings, Andrea. Congrats for your placement with this splendid piece! ;-)
Gondolf Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Congrats Andrea, I can feel your pride beaming!
Haight Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 6:13 PM
What a wonderful accomplishment to celebrate with your son as a reward for your diligent parenting, Andrea. Well-written, and congrats on this achievement, and your poem's placement too. Hugs, Sandra
Pett Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, wonderful memories. :))
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 3:23 AM
Real happy moment for the parents to recall a son's graduation day, Awesome.Love.
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 11:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place win . It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. It's a great feeling when children achieve success.
Vaso Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Warms the heart this, you must be proud, and I love poems that tell of such nice personal memories and stories!
One Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 4:39 PM
A lovely memory and a lovely poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
May Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:16 AM
A proud moment and a wonderful write Andrea
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Yea! way to go Jeremy, or should I say Andrea??? Good write, good luck in the contest...
Melugin Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Andrea, I just beheld a picture of your heart and I stand in awe. Love like this is serenely special! My best, chuck
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 9:01 AM
A tremendous story...it must make you proud.
Y. Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Wow! Andrea, I know you are proud of your son and you should be.It takes hard work to graduate from law school and then to pass the bar examine takes real determination. I really enjoyed your take on the contest theme. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Parker Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 10:55 PM
You should be as I know you are, very proud...I know how much effort went into this and for those that don't know it takes a lot of hard work and sacrifice...happy for you Andrea
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