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Recalling a Beach Memory

Sand S-h-i-f-t-i-n-g U n d e r n e a t h Strong hands hold me Waves lap at my feet as I smile content 10/22/17 Contest: Dust off a memory Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 11/2/2017 3:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Very well deserved!

Constance La France

Date: 10/30/2017 9:42:00 AM

Jo, congratulations on your win in my contest with is sweet write and I love your image too !

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2017 7:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this wonderful write Jo

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/29/2017 6:52:00 PM

Wonderful, loving imagery plus a tribute to your Dad in so few words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Brian Davey

Date: 10/29/2017 12:28:00 PM

I know this feeling oh so well Jo having lived need to the beach my entire life! Congrats on your placement

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/29/2017 9:25:00 AM

Hi Jo, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/28/2017 11:30:00 PM

Endearing Jo! How many must relate to your words. ; )

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2017 1:35:00 PM

This is so sweet!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2017 6:44:00 PM

Wonderful, Jo. I wish I had memories like this one. Did not get to know my father well and my mom divorced him when I was very young.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/23/2017 2:53:00 PM

A memory of great pricelessness.

MD Johnson

Date: 10/23/2017 11:58:00 AM

As a father, I have seen that smile. Truly priceless. Well done.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/23/2017 10:28:00 AM

Hi Jo, You have penned such a beautiful and nostalgic memory. Nice photo as well. Thanks for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis