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Recall

Hushed, quiet and still
the forest revives my soul
   I  remember me.







for Raul Moreno's
Solace in Nature contest

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 6/19/2016 9:41:00 PM

Gentle breezes and rustling leaves, "the forest revives". How peaceful you made it sound!

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 6/16/2016 8:21:00 PM

Excellent capturing of moment in time. I love haiku, and this one revives me, too.

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/17/2016 10:08:00 AM

Thank you Ms Iris!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/16/2016 1:46:00 AM

Very nice indeed .

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/17/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thank you Debbie!

James Inman

Date: 6/15/2016 12:52:00 PM

Clever Haiku.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/19/2009 8:44:00 PM

yes! expressed well!...jim

Joshua Lacey

Date: 9/16/2009 4:21:00 PM

nature sure can be a powerful experience nicely put :)

John Freeman

Date: 9/13/2009 8:29:00 PM

beautiful Haiku, Trudy. Rec. your comment, Love can work miracles, especially if one will open up the heart, where love is stored in oneself. Sincerely, Moses

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/13/2009 3:31:00 PM

The beauty and quiet that flows from the forest are felt and captured so very well within your haiku,,a true beauty,,my friend,,,blessings and thank you for reading and leaving wonderful words upon mine...Cecil

James Fraser

Date: 9/13/2009 9:01:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Trudy, good luck in Raul's contest>>James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/12/2009 11:05:00 AM

Trudy, this is lovely and a perfect entry in Rauls' contest! Good luck! Love, Robin

Danny Nunn

Date: 9/12/2009 4:25:00 AM

Great write and another winner..Glad that you liked Angel Trail....it was about my father. He was killed in a auto accident, but an old cowboy. His last words were," Don't worry about me, the angels are here to take me home". Thanks Danny

Brian Strand

Date: 9/12/2009 12:48:00 AM

Trudy have a good weekend Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/11/2009 1:51:00 PM

Yes, you certainly do, Trudy, I understand this well, I do love nature and I like your Haiku. Thanks for your comment....Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 9/10/2009 11:44:00 PM

Like that last reflective line Trudy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Elaine George

Date: 9/10/2009 5:42:00 PM

STUNNING HAIKU! To my favorites instantly. wonderful, Trudy. Lainie, and thank you for your kind comments

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/10/2009 12:50:00 PM

Awesome and truly beautiful. I think Raul's contest brought out a lot of truly peaceful poetry.

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/9/2009 8:25:00 AM

this is a well written poem for the picture provided. good luck in the contest

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/9/2009 5:15:00 AM

This is a great entry, Trudy. This forest is a beautiful place to revive... God be with you. Good luck in Ruben's contest. Lovingly, Dane

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 12:15:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Trudy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/8/2009 5:07:00 PM

For some it is the forest, for others the mountans. I "remember me" when I am at sea, Trudy. This is a wonderful reflection on that which keeps us grounded and centered. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/7/2009 6:49:00 PM

I love the ivocative element....finding yourself! Great work, Trudy! We sometimes do need such a place of solitude to discover who we are! ~ Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/7/2009 5:29:00 PM

nicely done, good luck in the contest.

Date: 9/7/2009 4:15:00 PM

Interesting slant on the contest topic. I can relate to the second line--nature does that for me. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

P Sheart

Date: 9/7/2009 4:06:00 PM

Hi Oh ,this is so beautiful, makes me feel right at home connected to the oneness of nature! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in contest, a winner either way! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia