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Rebuild Anew

“Rebuild anew”, he said to me,
the one of stillness ‘neath the sea.
“Rise to the shore; as one we’ll stand.
These hardened castles made of sand 
protect your darkest memory.”

The lone wolf blows with certainty.
He shatters hollow masonry.
Destruction steadied by still hand.
Rebuild anew.

I only want tranquility, 
to end these tortures mindlessly.
My heart be still, my life be grand.
Upon the rock I claim this land
to reinvent my destiny.
Rebuild anew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/10/2010 2:27:00 PM
wow yeah i agree with the others this poem i thought, was brilliantly wordedi love your writing and i always come to read you first and am never dissapointed, would love to know what you think of mine thatnks, Jo
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Date: 2/21/2010 10:39:00 AM
enjoyed that
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Date: 12/27/2009 10:09:00 PM
Looking thru past wiinners to see what they like here. This makes me feel good. They chose a rondeau!! I can do rondeau!! You did a great one. Congrats! andrea
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Date: 10/20/2009 6:59:00 AM
Amen Yoni! A very brilliant job indeed,the product of a loving seed.You no doubt deserved that place,for running such a close run race.Keep scoring,God Bless, PRINCE
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Date: 10/19/2009 2:04:00 PM
oh to live in peace in Zion. when Jacobs trouble has ended, then build. jhl
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Date: 10/19/2009 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Yoni, on your 2nd place win in the June 2009 Poetry Soup Contest. Your beautiful poem is most definitely a winner as are you with your poetic skills. I am very happy for you. May "The one of stillness by the sea" continue to bless you with excellent words and wisdom. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/19/2009 2:29:00 AM
Dear Yoni, Congratulations on this masterpiece winning second place. Lainie
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:24:00 PM
Yoni, congratulations on your second place finish in the Poetry Soup contest! What an accomplishment! Enjoy your wonderful honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 10/15/2009 10:33:00 AM
What a wonderful birthday present, Yoni !! Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the PoetrySoup Contest for June '09. Keep up the great writing !!
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Date: 10/15/2009 10:12:00 AM
beautiful as always Yoni =) congrats on your 2nd place win xo Raiin
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:36:00 PM
Wonderful script. FELICITATIONS for your win on PS contest.
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Date: 10/14/2009 2:43:00 PM
Congrats for this!!! Epic last stanza @.@ windy jojojo thanks for the experience =D
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Date: 10/14/2009 1:56:00 PM
congrats on the win, great poem here!!
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:10:00 AM
Many congrats on you second place Yoni, well done >> James
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:10:00 AM
Wow, very nice indeed! Great write! Congrats on winning 2nd place, well deserved. LOL Caryl
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Date: 10/14/2009 6:25:00 AM
Wowser 2nd place BOYO!!! Huzzah!!! Hip hip hurray...you beat me out too you little dickens! Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2009 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Yoni. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/13/2009 9:58:00 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your 2nd place poem, Yoni. Great work and well deserved. ~<><
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Date: 10/13/2009 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful poetic write. Congratulations on 2nd place. Truly a wonderful poem.
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Date: 10/13/2009 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your #2 win!! Outstanding, I'm so happy for you! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/13/2009 6:58:00 PM
Hooray, 2nd place win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great work, and how wonderful to be acknowledged as a great poet that you are!!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:08:00 PM
Best of luck with both entries...Raul
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:07:00 PM
Yoni, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:13:00 PM
Just dropping by to add---Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. It is a tribute to your talent. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on these two winning poems....good luck in the next round!! ~ Carrie
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