Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Tanka

Reason Men Go Clown

Women hair, beauty gem  
Hair wet under waterfall
Drenched magic spell
Droplets on Strand, beads of pearl 
Hair Crown, reason men go Clown

Women hair, beauty gem
Cascading strands stroking butt
Hair sexier than butt
Hair locking sensuous look       
Hair bait, hooking men often

Women hair, beauty gem
Part falling back, part in front
Tufts face's beauty arch
Soft wavy dangling hair arrow
Hair arch, piercing heart's armour      


( Entry for Poetry Contest - Enchantment of Fall...Tanka a moment by Amy Green)Women

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Debbie Guzzi November 18, 2010 at 4:16 AM Such a unique write..my favorite lines are the last 2! Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2010 at 8:40 PM Hey, I see you changed now to THREE tanka. Now you are all set for the contest!! Good luck again! andrea

Jimmy Anderson October 27, 2010 at 8:58 AM Hey Hitendra, Thnx for reading my poem and congrats to you too on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2010 at 7:19 AM Hitendra, I wish you best of luck. I see you added on. It's sure a new way of talking about the fall, the fall of a woman's sensuous hair! I'm rushing off to work and want to thank you for your response. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2010 at 6:44 AM HItandra, thanks for visiting my poem. This one is very pretty. Just to let you know, I believe this contest asks for three tanka. I might be wrong, but I don't want you to be disappointed. I know you look forward to a win. Good luck, dear. LUv, Andrea PS. you can respond to the other people here by clicking on their name and then leaving your comment to them under one of their poems. Hardly anyone will return to this poem and see what you wrote back to them!

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2010 at 6:44 AM oops. sorry, I spelled your name wrong!

Dr Hitendra Mehta October 21, 2010 at 8:55 PM @Gerrard - thnx for nice comments. Not really offbeat, in Indian context....maybe from Western context. Luv/Best wishes always ........Hitendra Mehta

Gerard Keogh Jr. October 21, 2010 at 6:49 PM A womans' glory is in her hair. Nice last line. Offbeat,but brittle and effective, Thank you and regards, Gerard.

Dr Hitendra Mehta October 17, 2010 at 9:33 PM @Dr Ram @ Sara- thnx for nice comments. Shall get a big boost if this one wins ............ Luv/best wishes always ... Hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta October 17, 2010 at 3:42 PM very wtty, humorous yet a matter of fact write Hitendra

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2010 at 1:36 PM Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr Hitendra Mehta October 17, 2010 at 10:52 AM @Catie alias morning glory.........Thnx for lovely comments. I feel humbled when connected to Dr Ram Mehta a respected name on Poetrysoup. I am not related to him. Wuud like to b like him on poetrysoup with luv from all.........Luv/Best wishes always....Hitendra Mehta

Dr Hitendra Mehta October 17, 2010 at 8:01 AM @Katherine - Your trimming of Long hair was for BEAUTIFUL cause, thru wig U immortalised beauty.... Sorry about Mother fighting cancer, wish her strength to bear.....thnx for nice comments...........Luv/Best wishes always..........Hitendra Mehta

Katherine Stella October 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM I had hair down to butt but when mom got cancer I cut it all off and made a wig for lochs of love they took off 14 ' liked your play on words here imagery was great too also thanks for your kind comment on my poem appreicate it keep up the great writing and very nice to meet you