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Women hair, beauty gem Hair wet under waterfall Drenched magic spell Droplets on Strand, beads of pearl Hair Crown, reason men go Clown Women hair, beauty gem Cascading strands stroking butt Hair sexier than butt Hair locking sensuous look Hair bait, hooking men often Women hair, beauty gem Part falling back, part in front Tufts face's beauty arch Soft wavy dangling hair arrow Hair arch, piercing heart's armour ( Entry for Poetry Contest - Enchantment of Fall...Tanka a moment by Amy Green)Women

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Date: 11/18/2010 4:16:00 AM
Such a unique write..my favorite lines are the last 2! Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:40:00 PM
Hey, I see you changed now to THREE tanka. Now you are all set for the contest!! Good luck again! andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:58:00 AM
Hey Hitendra, Thnx for reading my poem and congrats to you too on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:19:00 AM
Hitendra, I wish you best of luck. I see you added on. It's sure a new way of talking about the fall, the fall of a woman's sensuous hair! I'm rushing off to work and want to thank you for your response. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/25/2010 6:44:00 AM
HItandra, thanks for visiting my poem. This one is very pretty. Just to let you know, I believe this contest asks for three tanka. I might be wrong, but I don't want you to be disappointed. I know you look forward to a win. Good luck, dear. LUv, Andrea PS. you can respond to the other people here by clicking on their name and then leaving your comment to them under one of their poems. Hardly anyone will return to this poem and see what you wrote back to them!
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Date: 10/25/2010 6:44:00 AM
oops. sorry, I spelled your name wrong!
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Date: 10/21/2010 8:55:00 PM
@Gerrard - thnx for nice comments. Not really offbeat, in Indian context....maybe from Western context. Luv/Best wishes always ........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/21/2010 6:49:00 PM
A womans' glory is in her hair. Nice last line. Offbeat,but brittle and effective, Thank you and regards, Gerard.
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:33:00 PM
@Dr Ram @ Sara- thnx for nice comments. Shall get a big boost if this one wins ............ Luv/best wishes always ... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/17/2010 3:42:00 PM
very wtty, humorous yet a matter of fact write Hitendra
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Date: 10/17/2010 1:36:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2010 10:52:00 AM
@Catie alias morning glory.........Thnx for lovely comments. I feel humbled when connected to Dr Ram Mehta a respected name on Poetrysoup. I am not related to him. Wuud like to b like him on poetrysoup with luv from all.........Luv/Best wishes always....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:01:00 AM
@Katherine - Your trimming of Long hair was for BEAUTIFUL cause, thru wig U immortalised beauty.... Sorry about Mother fighting cancer, wish her strength to bear.....thnx for nice comments...........Luv/Best wishes always..........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:47:00 AM
I had hair down to butt but when mom got cancer I cut it all off and made a wig for lochs of love they took off 14 ' liked your play on words here imagery was great too also thanks for your kind comment on my poem appreicate it keep up the great writing and very nice to meet you
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