Get Your Premium Membership

Rearview Mirror

She thought She had it in her That she could Pull it off She thought She had the strength To watch it Tumble down Turned out time was precious She had ambitions of her own And couldn't be bothered To play his silly games AP: 3rd place 2023 Posted on March 11, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/12/2019 11:38:00 AM
Clever verse! I'm in awe. While instill looking behind me LOL!! James
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2019 12:40:00 AM
Now that is a unique take on things. Many has been the day that I wanted to tell off time; you've just done it for me; thanks.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Date: 3/11/2019 11:51:00 AM
It is so much easier to see in rear view, isn't it? Great write, Line, (write) to the point! Happy Monday xxoo
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Mike. Hindsight is 20/20. And when you want to get away, the rearview mirror is the best view for sure.
Date: 3/11/2019 10:50:00 AM
Oh snap! Succinct. xomo
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2019 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Maureen.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things