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A woman who had buns of steel
Was proud of their wanton appeal
A judge had a feel
And deemed them ideal
But an eel made her squeal surreal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ricci Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Hello Rico - Ok, this is adorable and light. The scene and moment brings a smile and chuckle. Always is that good for the soul. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes...
Lawrence Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Wow Rico ! A scream for sure !! Those darn eels !! Susan :)
Lawrence Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Hysterical !!
Leffanta Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 10:13 AM
As Dean Martin sang, "That's a moray!" Aloha 'oe!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 12:22 AM
I thought you were going somewhere else with this Rico. I expected a different ending. Something like he found out her buns weren’t real. Lol A good one. Blessings xxoo
Leffanta Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Beware the eels, Connie! Aloha!
George Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:40 PM
You have enhanced the fun with the play of words.... ! An eel will make anyone squeal.....! Real funny... Rico
Leffanta Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 10:14 AM
They do, indeed! Aloha!
Faulkner Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 6:05 PM
I would squeal at an eel too (though lacking the aforementioned buns)
Leffanta Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Work In Progress?
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 12:54 PM
ha ha ha that last line is so darn funny:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Your cucumber poems are funnier! Aloha! Rico
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