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A woman who had buns of steel Was proud of their wanton appeal A judge had a feel And deemed them ideal But an eel made her squeal surreal

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Date: 2/5/2022 12:42:00 PM
Hello Rico - Ok, this is adorable and light. The scene and moment brings a smile and chuckle. Always is that good for the soul. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes...
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Date: 2/5/2022 8:19:00 AM
Wow Rico ! A scream for sure !! Those darn eels !! Susan :)
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/5/2022 12:17:00 PM
Hysterical !!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/5/2022 10:13:00 AM
As Dean Martin sang, "That's a moray!" Aloha 'oe!
Date: 2/5/2022 12:22:00 AM
I thought you were going somewhere else with this Rico. I expected a different ending. Something like he found out her buns weren’t real. Lol A good one. Blessings xxoo
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/5/2022 10:14:00 AM
Beware the eels, Connie! Aloha!
Date: 2/4/2022 7:40:00 PM
You have enhanced the fun with the play of words.... ! An eel will make anyone squeal.....! Real funny... Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/5/2022 10:14:00 AM
They do, indeed! Aloha!
Date: 2/4/2022 6:05:00 PM
I would squeal at an eel too (though lacking the aforementioned buns)
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/5/2022 10:14:00 AM
Work In Progress?
Date: 2/4/2022 12:54:00 PM
ha ha ha that last line is so darn funny:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/5/2022 10:16:00 AM
Your cucumber poems are funnier! Aloha! Rico

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