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Reaping the Whirlwind

Weeping willow in winter, its limbs limp with frozen tears… awaiting the break of spring. Age weighs wearily upon my shoulders hunched over with mounting years. I'll sleep good tonight and silently slip into a somber slumber, For once I will not dream any dreams. In the gathering gloom of twilight Oh, I'll sleep well tonight and dread not the break of a new day! ~Contest by Laura Loo, One of Five ~Prompt: Weeping Willow tree ~words count: 65 ~5/15/17

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Date: 8/8/2017 3:37:00 PM
Abdul, this is a beautiful written poem you wrote. Have a nice day.
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Date: 5/28/2017 8:00:00 PM
I like this very much. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 5/27/2017 5:16:00 PM
Silently slip into a somber slumber... Congrats, Abdul!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/27/2017 6:05:00 PM
Amen! lol Thanks Kim.
Date: 5/25/2017 11:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this somber little poem Abdul. Thanks and Congratulations on your recognition in the contest. - Dean
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/26/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Dean. Appreciate your comment.

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