Realize

i hear my heart crack as it breaks because i realize that you're gone.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2016 11:02:00 AM

JJ David, NICE!!! Awesomely Penned.... Always ~LINDA~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2014 5:34:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, JJ - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/25/2014 7:52:00 PM

I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita