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Not entirely fiction? Is she a forerunner of the future?

Recently the Japanese unveiled a female Robot at an Expo which left visitors aghast and wondering if she was real. She smiled, waved to the crowd, spoke and made eye contact with coordinated eye movements.

Some Fembots even have temperature controlled fluids flowing through their ‘veins’.

It seems in the United States, anatomically correct and organic looking male-bots with bionic parts have now been invented.

Ladies do we have to come to this?

Synthetic hyper realistic - eclectic not eccentric Android Humanoid - naturalistic totally orgasmic Unnatural physicality this futuristic fem-bot fantasy Against all normality she is the ultimate sexpot ecstasy Soulless secretions a monster metallic A copy completion approaching organic Interacting to all moods set to relieve and to please Vampish or subservient to tease and appease Divergent settings fed into her pretty little head Interaction spread through every word that is said Favoured by lust as love turns into dust A bodacious bust that someday will rust She will speak - she will moan and emit a sensual groan Blood pressures spike and blown to expectant pleasures unknown Surreal as created when she’s typically stimulated Her veins strobed and pulsated gets hearts palpitated Love in a box the new carnal cosmetic clocks She shakes and she rocks and even dirty talks Steel hearts with no gratitude just don’t have an attitude With an artificial intelligent aptitude she is imbued Pressure point connections are interfaced for affections Crafted to perfections nominate a multitude of selections She strikes a pose as you take off her clothes No need for a rose as you undress her and expose With positions quite endless she won’t be rebellious Neither jealous or feckless - nor pretentious or reckless She is luscious and salacious - certainly not capricious But romantic and delicious or sexily flirtatious A disheartened Delilah a gratifying Lady Godiva Unleashing a metal messiah a pandemic pariah Alas for us ladies lack of mystique renders the future so bleak Ousted by electronics that supersede emotions as we speak Perhaps settling for corporeal bots vibrating may leave us shaking To satiate our needs without restraining, limiting or them taking?
Acknowledgement: A sincere thank you from ‘Down Under’ to my good friend WW for your contribution of the couplets which added to the ‘Electronic spice’ of my revised and revamped poetic creation. I hope I have done you PROUD with my internal rhyming my dear friend? I wish you a speedy recovery from your three bouts of flu. We look forward to you reposting as soon as you are feeling well Video Clip: M C Sar The Real McCoy - Another Night - VERSION EUROPEA, 1993 / Feb 2013

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Date: 5/7/2018 11:25:00 AM
Modern technology comes up with great inventions, but in this case robotic females just cannot compete with the real thing (and that refers to both pros and cons)! Your poem brings awareness to the fact that materialistic things can be shiny on the outside, but lacking shine on the inside. Enjoyed your poem and the capable use of internal rhyme, Maria. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/30/2018 12:26:00 PM
A good thing, though, perhaps, Maria, for some overly shy fellas...if they can afford one one these lovelies. Wonder if Amazon will carry them? At least you won't have to "blow them up". A darkly funny piece. I don't think any of you "real" ladies have anything to worry about...but how about "call girls" in Las Vegas, etc. And since they're not human, would it considered "cheating"? Lots to think about here.
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Date: 3/31/2018 12:20:00 AM
Lol, I'm sure Amazon will be the first on the band wagon. You pose a lot of questions Jim, much to be pondered. Hmm let me think on this and get back to you? Haha, I think it will definitely put some out of business. Thanks Jim for the visit and interesting feedback....Maria :)
Date: 2/18/2018 8:49:00 PM
Such a scary futuristic vision that haunts us today---yet shades of 1984 (the love-making between Winston and Julia) as well. Marvelous marvel of a write! Kudos! :-) Gershon
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Date: 2/8/2018 7:28:00 AM
Wow, I can't imagine this being a good thing. But my goodness, you brought it, with this write. It is sad and scary to think of our technology coming to this.
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Date: 1/29/2018 9:07:00 PM
What a head snapping jaw dropper Maria! Awesomeness!
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Date: 1/29/2018 3:22:00 PM
You are a visionary poetess...master writer and beautiful soul...I bow and am very proud my dear friend...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 1/27/2018 10:28:00 AM
Nicely done, Maria & ^WW^, enjoyed reading Hugs eve
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Date: 1/29/2018 6:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve, it's always a pleasure to have you stopping by ...Maria xxx
Date: 1/23/2018 6:21:00 PM
Wow, Maria! This poem is a masterpiece! You really nailed it. A bit scary but still a wonderful piece of literature which I think should be one for the annuls. Your knowledge of the subject shows in the vocabulary and yet the emotional impact of such a life-changing invention shines through and leaves the reader either excited or aghast. Me: I'm aghast but awed.
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Date: 1/25/2018 5:31:00 AM
Lol, I thought you would like the vocabulary. Scary stuff Carole, AI, still it has a fascinating aspect as well. Thanks for dropping by dear friend, always appreciate your comments...Maria xxx
Date: 1/19/2018 9:59:00 PM
Intelligent delivery of the emergence of robotics and transhumanism. One word, "Soulless". Scary world, scary times. I've been following Sophia, and had come across Sexbots, as one is want to do...watched a movie the other night titled, "The Beyond" interesting take on it all. Thought you might like it Maria. [https://gomovies.sc/movie/the-beyond-2017/]
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Date: 1/25/2018 5:33:00 AM
Thanks Leanne, I'll be sure to watch that. Thanks for dropping by with your dazzling comments, always appreciate it my dear....Maria xxx
Date: 1/19/2018 5:36:00 PM
Maria: I'm trying to visualize the "in store display" of these creations. Think of the inventory necessary to meet everyone's choices. :o) The cheating mate could just trade you in for a "newer" model. :o) Thanks for sharing these thoughts with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 1/19/2018 1:27:00 PM
Beauty and the beast, someone(something) for those without love at last. love your poetry and love this too. one could say i'm coming from a different direction, Maria,
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Date: 1/19/2018 8:19:00 AM
This is wonderfully and brilliantly written, as well as very scary...the future is now as July Morning writes, and looking perfectly bleak. Thank you for shining light into this very dark corner!
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:10:00 AM
The future of passion in inanimate fashion...it's scifi come to life...Well written Maria
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Joseph....Maria
Date: 1/11/2018 5:06:00 PM
There'll be men too...You just wrote the future of love ... It would have every emotion we have and more...even if you want disappointment you can get that too... Lovely Maria...Send my regards to WW
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Date: 1/12/2018 11:03:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Arturo. My head note at the top of the image says it all...Maria
Date: 1/11/2018 10:56:00 AM
Maria, this whole idea of AI is just a bit scary to me, I think perhaps some of our great scientific minds are headed in a dangerous direction. Maybe I'm just a bit old fashion but I would prefer the flesh of a woman to the artificial skin of a machine. All the best to you my friend! John
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Date: 1/12/2018 11:02:00 PM
Thanks for your visit John to my 'tongue in cheek' poem. I am with you - the real thing is definitely preferable to the artificial. I guess I'm old fashioned too!... Maria
Date: 1/10/2018 8:38:00 AM
Reminds me of the 2 Blade Runner movies, in which the robots are so advanced they are exactly like humans, physically, intellectually, emotionally. I can't help wondering if anyone would still mind robotic company if there's simply no difference anymore. Anyway, fascinating topic, lovely rhymes, engaging read. Fantastic write, Maria! I really enjoyed it :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 1:32:00 AM
You are the second person to say that, one of my favorite movies too. Thanks Bernard, so glad that you liked it. Thank you for dropping by and support...Maria
Date: 1/9/2018 3:14:00 PM
This is a fascinating topic you drew our attention to, and I loved also reading the couplets that were written by WW. I heard that Stephen HAwkings is saying the AF's are going to bring down humans. Maybe she-bot is part of the plot!!
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:55:00 AM
Ha Ha! that's not going to happen as long as us women can help it. After all they won't be able to match the naturalness of us women - besides women have the inbuilt natural 'smart chip' that will conquer all. But they can do my housework though. Thanks for your visit Andrea. Loved your comment. Maria xxx
Date: 1/9/2018 1:18:00 PM
Maria, this is a very good one... Enjoyed reading your poem today. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Linda for your appreciation. I much appreciate your visit...Maria
Date: 1/9/2018 10:34:00 AM
I've seen it on the news, how people are losing jobs because of these robots. Personally I love flesh and blood! Lol! Anyhow, Maria my dear friend, you another fantastic art from you! Of course I'm blown away always... I'm pretty sure ^WW^ is very proud. And I pray for his speedy recovery cause I miss him too.. Sending hugs to both of yours :)
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for your visit my lovely friend. I so enjoy your visits. Maria xxx
Date: 1/8/2018 5:10:00 PM
Wow, my dear friend Maria! Such a mind blowing write of fantastic artistic and poetic proportions and a wonderful collaboration with WW. Your poem is filled with great lines of thoughts, imagery and rhymes that paint a sad but thought provoking picture. Beautifully expressed, intelligent, striking commentary of what the future holds.. Warmest wishes and hugs my lovely friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/9/2018 2:10:00 AM
It was a fun write Susan, both WW and I really love that song, I think it was that more then anything that inspired this poem.A creepy situation isn't it the whole thing just creeps me out. Still its out there, appealing to a multitude of strange people. Each to their own I guess. Thank you my dear friend for popping by and your amazing comments, I always look forward to them....Maria xxx
Date: 1/8/2018 3:11:00 PM
- I personally like humanity of flesh and blood :) - "To satiate your needs" ... plastic is better than metal :))) - An impressive rhyming and the accompanying music goes well with this awsome poem, Maria - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2018 1:44:00 AM
Yes Anne-Lise, its got me scared, what is this world coming to? I think it would be the "creepiest thing" having a robot so lifelike in the house. I couldnt image anything more scary. Still it was fun writing this one.Thanks for the visit and support my friend.....Maria xxx
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:13:00 PM
:))) ... ok. ... I'm old fashioned me too :))))
Date: 1/8/2018 8:01:00 AM
What a sad path humanity is travelling upon, when people prefer robots to a real woman... A thought provoking write which highlights a worrying truth Maria...
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Date: 1/9/2018 1:35:00 AM
Yes indeed, what is this world coming to? Thanks for your visit Si, now did you say you wanted a brunette or a blonde? Baby blues or green eyes? Oh, one who does the housework? No sorry... that's not due for some years yet......Maria
Date: 1/8/2018 7:18:00 AM
...but will she cook my dearest, Maria or they have other robots for that? Hahaha ! I am horrified with the prospect for people would be more alienated and less human. Whatever the case your poem is a fantastic presentation of the future ! Wondrous writing! Call me old-fashioned my friend but I will stick to God's created woman! Haha!
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Date: 1/8/2018 7:51:00 AM
Please stay old fashioned dearest Demetrios, or otherwise us women run the risk of becoming redundant. I believe they have been programmed to do housework too, Lol. On those conditions I shall allow one in. Thank you for the glowing review, most appreciated my friend....Maria
Date: 1/8/2018 6:29:00 AM
A well crafted creation ...lovely rhymes.. your words make her as real as she looks...a tremendous art piece, Maria. Kudos, friend. And kudos to WW!
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Date: 1/8/2018 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, that's one way of putting it, describing the poem as art, I am very flattered. I was wanting to depict something different here, both in context and poetic delivery. Thank you for noticing it.....Maria