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She loved him more than she could say With a love that would never go away She gave him her heart Her kindness and warmth Everything she gave him She gave without thought Of gain or reward She gave generously With hope that lifted up Each time he whispered I love you too He took advantage of her kindness Her inspiration, love and vision Refusing to listen to love’s cry He soon left her without any remorse She was wrecked by his leaving Ravaged with pain and sorrow, overwhelmed By the thought that her love Had been squandered on a heart Who didn’t really care at all It wasn’t long, though… until someone sought her Bought her and taught her That love was more than a mere kiss It bid adieu to lovers and in all truth Love that would last Came alive from the assurance That God is love And His love is the best His love is the love that captured her heart And showed her that she could rise again Like a phoenix from the ashes She found her love In the truth of Him The One who gives without conditions Fills the spirit with compassion And gives hope, faith and love That is forever, eternal A promise of heaven above God sends down His kindness To those who listen for the voice Of One who abides inside Singing through the silence Songs that break through darkness Bring light that is a consuming fire The Holy Spirit’s glow Singing to our very soul Phoenix Rising poetry contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker March 22, 2021

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Date: 3/31/2021 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day and Easter...............
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Date: 3/31/2021 4:33:00 AM
Extremely spritual and soulful....Congrats on your win....much love :)
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Date: 3/30/2021 7:26:00 PM
Regina! Thank you for participating in the contest and sharing this brilliant work with us all, with a personal (fictional?) touch. Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘where are we headed’. God bless!
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:41:00 PM
Bravo! Here you have beautifully stated the Simple Truths of the most profound & complex workings of God’s gifting of love, which we so desire we will mistakenly see it where it is not, or miss seeing its This is one of your most thoughts e presence when it’s all surrounding! One of your most provoking, evangelical poems ever
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Date: 3/22/2021 12:21:00 PM
I love the deep spirituality that you gave us with this one! Specifically the last stanza, overall gentle flow of sentence to sentence. I loved it a lot.
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