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Reading the Future

The lass came to consult in the darkening gloaming,
Shyly, she knocked on the frosted window
Of the gypsy’s cabin.  She was sick with trepidation,
As she was ushered into the musty, decrepit room.

The crystal globe on the table seemed opaque.
Unpredictable how things came fearsomely to a head.
The globe cleared momentarily and became luminous. 
Intimidating hums and aha followed this,
As if all has been quickly but ominously revealed.

The gypsy fortune teller’s voice was full of pathos,
“I see a young, valiant man guiding you into a shop.
Armed men entered to steal what they could.
Someone fired a shot.  The young man protected her.
He died on the spot.” All this she saw in the globe.

The young lass vowed she’d never enter into any shop,
But the gypsy assured her that she would do so.
The future cannot in any way be changed.  It was immutable.
The lass left; sure, she would be melancholy for evermore.


Fiction & Fantasy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Now that would be difficult to hear. . and who can avoid ever going into a shop. Unique story, Victor
Eslinger Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 9:09 AM
2) I think i was (humbly ) a cild of God with some Christian mystic gifts to age edifying Our Most Holy Lord & what she read that day was “*Hands off this one!” One event i felt w/quiet inner voice that changed my life). “God is our sun and shield.”
Buhagiar Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 12:52 PM
As I wrote to Woody, this poem is fantasy and fiction. Not to be believed. I am a child of God and I believe only in Him and no one else. Poetry is only a diversion and I write just unbelievable stories.
Eslinger Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 9:04 AM
1. Whoa Victor! impactful story/pen! in college, w/3others, went to tarot /palm reader. All around a table, i was last to be read.1st the cards…she said nothing, pushed cards aside & asked to see my palm…then the other palm. Finally she said, (true, victor) “I cannot read you.” Period. glory to God,i
Singh Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:34 PM
Entertaining.I think fortune tellers still exist everywhere.The poem very well written.
DiMino Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 9:55 PM
A real spooky story, well told. I did have my palm read at a carnival when I was a young boy. Not to know the future -- She was cute!
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:08 AM
- You can't get ahead of the future and try to shape it... - some believe/others don't - An imaginative story, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Ahhh!!! Creative story told in poetic form. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for making it entertaining to enliven my day. If for a contest, it reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Sara K
Greenhough Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 6:58 AM
Another excellent poem. The future, it is true, is already written. The problem is that people who are paid to tell the future, are often scams. I'd tell the lass to find the man, but don't go into the shop.
Empress Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 6:46 AM
Dear victor, one of those poems that made me read twice, its sad that so many follow such advice and seek guidance from humanbeings that claim to know better while they don't. Very well written poem, i like the descriptive nature of your word weaving here. As always your storytelling is also engaging and powerful it is. Pleasure reading your poem, sending you light always
Romios Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 6:43 AM
A fascinating poem, Victor, Pangie xx
Daniel Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Great tale, I'm sure there must be a sequel in your mind, Victor, don't leave us hanging...
Godwin Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 8:07 PM
Your imagination is displayed in this write, and it shines. A joy to read, Victor - keep 'em coming ... CayCay
Lawrence Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Dear Victor, I love being embraced by your mysterious tales ..always provoking my thoughts and making me dig a bit deeper into the unknown . I have missed your poems and your creative heart and mind. Big hugs . I hope you are feeling well . Susan :)
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 6:42 PM
Eerie mysteries verse. We have fortune tellers’ places around Houston but never had a mood to have my palms read. What will be will be. Enjoyed reading my friend.
Buehler Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 2:46 PM
I enjoyed this fantasy tale, steeped in mystery, with a dark omen. The lovely picture is a perfect companion. Nicely done, Victor!
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 1:01 PM
Quite a forboding verse Victor, imagine being told someone bad was going to happen and you couldn't do anything about it. I'd rather not know, what will be will be. Tom
Poet Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 12:48 PM
So many metaphorical layers and profound meanings in your poem Victor. Although the future is the product of our hard working minds and our ability to understand it.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 11:23 AM
I don’t venture into the future expected in a crystal ball, forbidden by the word of God. To do such is to reach for demonic forces. I’m content at what God will reveal by His Holy Spirit. God bless!
Rolland Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 6:38 AM
a weird experience, i woulds scare the future somehow, a very interesting and delicious poem enjoyed
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