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If I find the time To pen down my words, You can read my rhyme When your time affords. To pen down my words, Thoughts I'd have to use, When your time affords, Can you find my muse? Thoughts I'd have to use, I desire to write, Can you find my muse Before it is night? I desire to write To set my mind free, Before it is night, Send her home to me. To set my mind free, Help me out, dear friend, Send her home to me, I'll read what you've penned. Help me out, dear friend, You can read my rhyme, I'll read what you've penned, If I find the time. 10/14/17

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Date: 4/20/2018 4:46:00 AM
- A great 3rd place in the contest, congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this delightful Pantoum! Enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/19/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Jo, with this sweet little poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
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Date: 1/5/2018 11:18:00 PM
awesome job -JT
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:02:00 PM
A wonderful Pantoum Jo with lovely rhythm, rhyme and content. Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/17/2017 9:09:00 PM
Hi Jo! Now this is the BEST pantoum I've read. I just love it! Best of luck in the contest. You definitely deserve to at least place but I would give you 1st. :)
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Date: 10/16/2017 4:03:00 PM
Works out perfectly Jo. Good pantoum. If it's for the contest good luck.
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Date: 10/15/2017 6:07:00 PM
Hello Jo, lovely penned poetry. You should be good for the contest. Have a good evening my friend.
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Date: 10/14/2017 4:49:00 PM
Hi Jo, I really like this form. I must say it isn't that easy but you did good.Nice flow , rhymes and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/14/2017 4:03:00 PM
This is so cute, loved it, and you are a pleasure to read!
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Date: 10/14/2017 2:44:00 PM
fluid pictures so well etched from your pen, jo....lovely wordage.. huggs
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Date: 10/14/2017 11:30:00 AM
what a wonderful monorhyme Jo - I've never tried one with less than ten syllables and you have done a fabulous job on a theme close to our hearts:-) hugs jan xx
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