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Reaching Out- In the Fragility of Dreams

A screaming baby hanging by the rock, Amidst the splashing turbulence of angry waves, I am running downhill to rescue the child, Over slippery stones with my shaken nerves, Time is ticking, ticking fast, between me and the scream, I wipe my glasses to clear the mist, to see where screaming baby lies! Between the rock at the very edge, It’s shirt held on by a tree branch, The baby screams as the wind swings it along, a dance between life and ocean waves! Barely six feet from the child, I lean across a rocky ledge, but waves rush in at me, as if to say “No!He is mine!” My hand reach out to grab his arm, slippery baby with slippery hands! The branch desires to hold him on as I wrestle the wood to free the child, a wet baby wrapped in my arms screaming louder than ever before! I roll away till we are safe and climb my way to safety heights. In the fragility of my dreams I often rescue this child, a child that lives deep in me! Trees and boulders, ocean and rocks, the vicissitudes of life that would not let him be. Written 19/05/2020 2nd placement In the fragility of dreams contest Sponsor Silent One

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:32:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/27/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne! We are half dream, some reality and some imagination! Pleased you visited my page and read my work. Regards
Date: 5/27/2020 1:36:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Krish. Like always, really happy to see your name in the list. Keep writing and inspiring. God bless you :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/27/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Aditi! Appreciate your support. My very best wishes to you!
Date: 5/27/2020 7:20:00 AM
Wow..Congratulations for your win Sir. It was so thrilling from the start to the end. Loved the poetic tale sir. I am making this one as my favorite poem.:-) Keep doing great works like this. Take care.With regards ~Deepa:-)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/27/2020 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Deepa! Glad you like it and making it Fave is always an honour! Best wishes
Date: 5/27/2020 6:00:00 AM
Great poetic storytelling... nice take on he contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/27/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thanks SO, loved composing it. How a contest can inspire a poem out of us! Thanks for hosting this lovely contest!
Date: 5/19/2020 2:55:00 PM
Wow! You had me on the edge of my seat with this one, Krish. Thanks for a great read! :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/19/2020 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! Always a pleasure to hear your views. Much obliged!:)
Date: 5/19/2020 9:21:00 AM
I love the metaphorical dream you have used to portray this experience that all of us often have. Saving the innocence of that child we had once been is such an asset and I am sure everyday we try our best. Beautiful imagery. Kudos to your imagination and flow Krish :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/19/2020 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Aditi. I like your analytical feedback. The child lives in all of us and must be cared for.

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