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Reaching For Heaven

I spied the dark little spitfires fork-tailed and white breasted, over the river bank and then my head they crested Then the couple would part to scour the tops of the reeds and meet triumphant amongst the leafy trees Their speedy haphazard unreasonable flight filled me with a piqued delight Why couldn’t I live their life for a day? To sing their exquisite joy, to speed, to swoop, to somersault, to dart and loop but sadly I am forever earthbound But in my mind having escaped this earthly prison I may be a house martin reaching for heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/26/2016 11:48:00 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR 2016
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:54:00 AM
Tony, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/18/2015 7:14:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Tony - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2015 10:01:00 PM
Thank you for the reply..
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:52:00 AM
Hey there Tony. Welcome to Poetry Soup. This is wonderfully penned. I hope to read more. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 1/14/2015 11:00:00 PM
Tony,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Tony Crowther
Date: 1/15/2015 8:13:00 AM
Cheers thank you for your very kind comment Linda

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