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Rays of Hope

Storm sweeps frail face of slate sky To safe nests the scared birds fly Gale of gloom blows through my mind On clouds’ fringe rays of hope lie. March 17, 2020 Syllable count : 7 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Let The Pens Flow - Jueju Sponsor : Jenish Somadas

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Date: 4/4/2020 9:19:00 AM
Lovely, uplifting piece, Subimal. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 4/4/2020 6:20:00 AM
This poem you wrote is beautiful, my friend. I love the imagery. Congratulations on your win JC Hawkens
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Date: 4/2/2020 11:25:00 AM
Loved the imagery you created..Congrats on your wonderful win Subimal..
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Date: 3/17/2020 12:27:00 PM
Hello Subimal Sinha- Roy, There is always a ray of Hope every day. Have a nice dday my friend.
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