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Acid based in composition vile stench that lingers. The sudden rip of flesh has made me numb. How dare you leave the one you claim to love so much. Easy to fall in, hard to let go of, Promise of forever broken overnight. Your true face comes to light, heartache and heartbreak by light of day. Who are you? My new enemy destroys without a blow. The impact never ends you make me homicidal. You move on and i am stuck with all the fallout. You still want to be friends but I am just not in that friendly place. You can't give me time, you say now or never, All or nothing, sink or swim. Hate is a strong word but I really don't like you. Our love is over, I'm sad to say But i refuse to crumble. I'm letting you go in style, honesty and respect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 12:41:00 AM
Laurie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/12/2016 7:15:00 AM
Laurie,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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