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Raven Skies

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Being lost in your mind; and left alone to roam; In a house with all the lights burning; but nobody's home In the clear night; stars burning brightly; but no lines drawn or shown Constellations; the only connection; that's never physically known But that's where salvation lies; Hidden behind those dead eyes; In the infinite unions; found; in those raven skies

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Paige Hind

Date: 11/12/2023 1:56:00 PM

Hey! Taking time to look at some of your old stuff. You keep getting better and better; you are really a growing talent.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/12/2023 2:59:00 PM

That is very high praise from someone that is growing at light speed! I'm glad that you're able to spend the time I thoroughly have enjoyed going through some of your older works as well. Pretty sure you already knew that though ;) Fondly A.S.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 5/18/2023 4:10:00 PM

I love the mysterious aura reflected in your poem. Beautifully penned and profound piece. Congrats on your POTD.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/18/2023 6:56:00 PM

Thank you very kindly Franci :) Regards A.S.

Valsa George

Date: 12/1/2022 8:15:00 AM

Very profound and mysterious like the raven skies. Congratulations on your POTD.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/1/2022 11:59:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind words! Best of luck to you in your upcoming contest!

Constance La France

Date: 12/1/2022 4:02:00 AM

Anonomus, A beautifully penned poem, so deep and thought provoking and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAT honor, blessings

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/1/2022 5:50:00 AM

Thank you very much Constance for the encouraging words!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/30/2022 10:02:00 PM

Warmest congratulations on POTD ~ beautiful write, enjoyed!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/1/2022 5:49:00 AM

Thank you Seeker you've been one of my best supporters since the start on this platform! Truly appreciate you!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/30/2022 5:44:00 PM

"Constellations the only connection, found in those raven skies." This statement leaves me in complete awe. Your thoughts are tender, beautiful, spiritual and emotional, all at the same time. I'm holding your words so close. Congratulations Anonomus, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 6:54:00 PM

Hugs right back Brandy! It Delights me very much that you find the true meaning that I intended behind this piece! Warmest regards

Bill Baker

Date: 11/30/2022 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Scorpio! Enjoy your special day! Bill

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Bill! It is indeed a special honor.... one I am greatful for!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/30/2022 7:26:00 AM

Plenty of pathways to roam here, Scorpio, among the constellations in the skies and in back of one's eyes. Congrats on POTD. Pondering the Universe, Gershon

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 7:46:00 AM

Much gratitude Sir!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/30/2022 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations on the honor of your POTD. :)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 6:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Alice! I've just begun to read some of your work and find myself very much at home!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/30/2022 6:05:00 AM

Back with congratulations for your POTD honours! I am thrilled for you and for this piece getting the attention it deserves. Have a fabulous day! xomo :)))

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 6:35:00 AM

It's the selfless compliments that are given That keeps the pen flowing and the ink driven Simply honored!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 11/30/2022 3:41:00 AM

I like this format in particular - the combination of rhyme and longer/shorter lines. The subject is intriguing as well - congrats on your poem of the day!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 3:53:00 AM

Thank you Jeff! It was very fun to see this one come together.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/30/2022 3:21:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 3:54:00 AM

Thank you very much! I have enjoyed reading your work too Heidi!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/30/2022 2:56:00 AM

Really nice, Anonomus. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 4:05:00 AM

Thank you Charlie!

Deb M

Date: 11/30/2022 2:42:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD…..Debx

Deb M
Date: 11/30/2022 4:48:00 PM

Why the Question marks?? Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 3:50:00 AM

Thank You Deb! Sorry Deb I was going for an emoji which does not transcribe it was meant to be a smiley face blushing. Was still learning this forums nuances at the time. Updated 2-6-23

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2022 2:05:00 AM

- A great poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. -

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 3:40:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/29/2022 9:14:00 PM

I absolutely love this. Fave’n it. Delicious poetry. xomo

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/29/2022 9:34:00 PM

I am honored by your praise! I can not believe I have not ran across your work as of yet! I think I may have found my poetry soul mate very pleased to have you reading me! I am enjoying your work too very much!