Anonomus Scorpio Poet Free verse

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Raven Skies

Being lost in your mind; and left alone to roam;
In a house with all the lights burning; but nobody's home
In the clear night; stars burning brightly; but no lines drawn or shown
Constellations; the only connection; that's never physically known
But that's where salvation lies; 
Hidden behind those dead eyes;
In the infinite unions; found; in those raven skies

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Paige Hind November 12, 2023 at 1:56 PM Hey! Taking time to look at some of your old stuff. You keep getting better and better; you are really a growing talent. Anonomus Scorpio November 12, 2023 at 2:59 PM That is very high praise from someone that is growing at light speed! I'm glad that you're able to spend the time I thoroughly have enjoyed going through some of your older works as well. Pretty sure you already knew that though ;) Fondly A.S.

Franci Hoffman May 18, 2023 at 4:10 PM I love the mysterious aura reflected in your poem. Beautifully penned and profound piece. Congrats on your POTD. Anonomus Scorpio May 18, 2023 at 6:56 PM Thank you very kindly Franci :) Regards A.S.

Valsa George December 1, 2022 at 8:15 AM Very profound and mysterious like the raven skies. Congratulations on your POTD. Anonomus Scorpio December 1, 2022 at 11:59 AM Thank you very much for your kind words! Best of luck to you in your upcoming contest!

Constance La France December 1, 2022 at 4:02 AM Anonomus, A beautifully penned poem, so deep and thought provoking and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAT honor, blessings Anonomus Scorpio December 1, 2022 at 5:50 AM Thank you very much Constance for the encouraging words!

Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2022 at 10:02 PM Warmest congratulations on POTD ~ beautiful write, enjoyed! Anonomus Scorpio December 1, 2022 at 5:49 AM Thank you Seeker you've been one of my best supporters since the start on this platform! Truly appreciate you!

Brandy Nicole November 30, 2022 at 5:44 PM "Constellations the only connection, found in those raven skies." This statement leaves me in complete awe. Your thoughts are tender, beautiful, spiritual and emotional, all at the same time. I'm holding your words so close. Congratulations Anonomus, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 6:54 PM Hugs right back Brandy! It Delights me very much that you find the true meaning that I intended behind this piece! Warmest regards

Bill Baker November 30, 2022 at 8:28 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Scorpio! Enjoy your special day! Bill Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 8:31 AM Thank you Bill! It is indeed a special honor.... one I am greatful for!

Gershon Wolf November 30, 2022 at 7:26 AM Plenty of pathways to roam here, Scorpio, among the constellations in the skies and in back of one's eyes. Congrats on POTD. Pondering the Universe, Gershon Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 7:46 AM Much gratitude Sir!

Linda Alice Fowler November 30, 2022 at 6:15 AM Congratulations on the honor of your POTD. :) Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thank you so much Alice! I've just begun to read some of your work and find myself very much at home!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 30, 2022 at 6:05 AM Back with congratulations for your POTD honours! I am thrilled for you and for this piece getting the attention it deserves. Have a fabulous day! xomo :))) Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 6:35 AM It's the selfless compliments that are given That keeps the pen flowing and the ink driven Simply honored!

Jeff Kyser November 30, 2022 at 3:41 AM I like this format in particular - the combination of rhyme and longer/shorter lines. The subject is intriguing as well - congrats on your poem of the day! Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 3:53 AM Thank you Jeff! It was very fun to see this one come together.

Heidi Sands November 30, 2022 at 3:21 AM Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :) Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 3:54 AM Thank you very much! I have enjoyed reading your work too Heidi!

Charles Messina November 30, 2022 at 2:56 AM Really nice, Anonomus. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 4:05 AM Thank you Charlie!

Deb M November 30, 2022 at 2:42 AM Congratulations on POTD…..Debx Deb M November 30, 2022 at 4:48 PM Why the Question marks?? Debx Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 3:50 AM Thank You Deb! Sorry Deb I was going for an emoji which does not transcribe it was meant to be a smiley face blushing. Was still learning this forums nuances at the time. Updated 2-6-23

Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2022 at 2:05 AM - A great poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - Anonomus Scorpio November 30, 2022 at 3:40 AM Thank you very much!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 29, 2022 at 9:14 PM I absolutely love this. Fave’n it. Delicious poetry. xomo Anonomus Scorpio November 29, 2022 at 9:34 PM I am honored by your praise! I can not believe I have not ran across your work as of yet! I think I may have found my poetry soul mate very pleased to have you reading me! I am enjoying your work too very much!