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Raven Skies

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Being lost in your mind; and left alone to roam;
In a house with all the lights burning; but nobody's home
In the clear night; stars burning brightly; but no lines drawn or shown
Constellations; the only connection; that's never physically known
But that's where salvation lies; 
Hidden behind those dead eyes;
In the infinite unions; found; in those raven skies

Copyright © Anonomus Scorpio | Year Posted 2022

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Paige Hind Date: 11/12/2023 1:56:00 PM Hey! Taking time to look at some of your old stuff. You keep getting better and better; you are really a growing talent. Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/12/2023 2:59:00 PM That is very high praise from someone that is growing at light speed! I'm glad that you're able to spend the time I thoroughly have enjoyed going through some of your older works as well. Pretty sure you already knew that though ;) Fondly A.S.

Franci Hoffman Date: 5/18/2023 4:10:00 PM I love the mysterious aura reflected in your poem. Beautifully penned and profound piece. Congrats on your POTD. Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 5/18/2023 6:56:00 PM Thank you very kindly Franci :) Regards A.S.

Valsa George Date: 12/1/2022 8:15:00 AM Very profound and mysterious like the raven skies. Congratulations on your POTD. Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 12/1/2022 11:59:00 AM Thank you very much for your kind words! Best of luck to you in your upcoming contest!

Constance La France Date: 12/1/2022 4:02:00 AM Anonomus, A beautifully penned poem, so deep and thought provoking and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAT honor, blessings Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 12/1/2022 5:50:00 AM Thank you very much Constance for the encouraging words!

Unseeking Seeker Date: 11/30/2022 10:02:00 PM Warmest congratulations on POTD ~ beautiful write, enjoyed! Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 12/1/2022 5:49:00 AM Thank you Seeker you've been one of my best supporters since the start on this platform! Truly appreciate you!

Brandy Nicole Date: 11/30/2022 5:44:00 PM "Constellations the only connection, found in those raven skies." This statement leaves me in complete awe. Your thoughts are tender, beautiful, spiritual and emotional, all at the same time. I'm holding your words so close. Congratulations Anonomus, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 6:54:00 PM Hugs right back Brandy! It Delights me very much that you find the true meaning that I intended behind this piece! Warmest regards

Bill Baker Date: 11/30/2022 8:28:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Scorpio! Enjoy your special day! Bill Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 8:31:00 AM Thank you Bill! It is indeed a special honor.... one I am greatful for!

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/30/2022 7:26:00 AM Plenty of pathways to roam here, Scorpio, among the constellations in the skies and in back of one's eyes. Congrats on POTD. Pondering the Universe, Gershon Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 7:46:00 AM Much gratitude Sir!

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/30/2022 6:15:00 AM Congratulations on the honor of your POTD. :) Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 6:39:00 AM Thank you so much Alice! I've just begun to read some of your work and find myself very much at home!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 11/30/2022 6:05:00 AM Back with congratulations for your POTD honours! I am thrilled for you and for this piece getting the attention it deserves. Have a fabulous day! xomo :))) Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 6:35:00 AM It's the selfless compliments that are given That keeps the pen flowing and the ink driven Simply honored!

Jeff Kyser Date: 11/30/2022 3:41:00 AM I like this format in particular - the combination of rhyme and longer/shorter lines. The subject is intriguing as well - congrats on your poem of the day! Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 3:53:00 AM Thank you Jeff! It was very fun to see this one come together.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/30/2022 3:21:00 AM Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :) Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 3:54:00 AM Thank you very much! I have enjoyed reading your work too Heidi!

Charles Messina Date: 11/30/2022 2:56:00 AM Really nice, Anonomus. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 4:05:00 AM Thank you Charlie!

Deb M Date: 11/30/2022 2:42:00 AM Congratulations on POTD…..Debx Login to Reply Deb M Date: 11/30/2022 4:48:00 PM Why the Question marks?? Debx Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 3:50:00 AM Thank You Deb! Sorry Deb I was going for an emoji which does not transcribe it was meant to be a smiley face blushing. Was still learning this forums nuances at the time. Updated 2-6-23

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/30/2022 2:05:00 AM - A great poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/30/2022 3:40:00 AM Thank you very much!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 11/29/2022 9:14:00 PM I absolutely love this. Fave’n it. Delicious poetry. xomo Login to Reply Anonomus Scorpio Date: 11/29/2022 9:34:00 PM I am honored by your praise! I can not believe I have not ran across your work as of yet! I think I may have found my poetry soul mate very pleased to have you reading me! I am enjoying your work too very much!