Raven

Raven by Kaitlin Griel for Among the Dead contest

Death hangs at my side
It lingers knowingly at my feet
It spreads for miles as far as I can see

I tower over the bodies and souls
That lie in the ground beneath me
Trapped in the heavy grasp of death

He’s coming after me now
 But I have been running too long
I can’t get away from him

He does not frighten me
But I don’t want him to possess my soul
I want it to fly free like a black raven

I’ll take my own life, a shot in the dark
And hope I make it out of here
Because I am a Raven, waiting to be free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 11, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Kaitlin Griel, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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February 24, 2011 at 11:57 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Kaitlin. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Nice story penned here!Congrats Kaitlin on your well deserved win in the contest----kashinath
Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 7:28 AM
Many congratulations Kaitlin on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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February 18, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Perhaps she did find freedom in death, Kaitlin. Very well done. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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February 18, 2011 at 12:47 AM
Great Dramatic Monologue, Kaitlin. Many congrat's on your well deserved win. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Kaitlin, congratulations on your honored place in the contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, kaitlin
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:35 PM
Impressive entry. Congratulations on winning with it in Constance's contest.
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February 17, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Congrats Kaitlin on your winning poem in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy sweet success with luv...
La France Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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