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Raven by Kaitlin Griel for Among the Dead contest Death hangs at my side It lingers knowingly at my feet It spreads for miles as far as I can see I tower over the bodies and souls That lie in the ground beneath me Trapped in the heavy grasp of death He’s coming after me now But I have been running too long I can’t get away from him He does not frighten me But I don’t want him to possess my soul I want it to fly free like a black raven I’ll take my own life, a shot in the dark And hope I make it out of here Because I am a Raven, waiting to be free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/11/2016 11:30:00 PM
Kaitlin Griel, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:57:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Kaitlin. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:14:00 AM
Nice story penned here!Congrats Kaitlin on your well deserved win in the contest----kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:28:00 AM
Many congratulations Kaitlin on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:19:00 AM
Perhaps she did find freedom in death, Kaitlin. Very well done. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:47:00 AM
Great Dramatic Monologue, Kaitlin. Many congrat's on your well deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:44:00 PM
Kaitlin, congratulations on your honored place in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, kaitlin
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:35:00 PM
Impressive entry. Congratulations on winning with it in Constance's contest.
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:14:00 PM
Congrats Kaitlin on your winning poem in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy sweet success with luv...
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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