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Ravaging Lust

She wraps around me With her eyes delectable She wafts of pure lust And I ravage with delight Love is our waging passion Russell Sivey Contest: One Tanka- Theme- Love Note Sponsor: Rick Parise 6/16/2013

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Elaine George

Date: 6/23/2013 6:40:00 PM

I agree with Andreal....ooh la la, Many congrats on your win, Russell. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2013 12:05:00 AM

ooh la la, Russell. One of yours I had not caught yet. Glad to see you got a win with it. Well deserved and congratulations to you.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/22/2013 5:28:00 PM

Quite the passionate write, Russell! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/22/2013 4:38:00 PM

Yes........on fire indeed!! Congratulations to you, Russell!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/22/2013 10:29:00 AM

I second Freddie's post! :) He worded it so well. Just popped by to congratulate you, Russell! :) This was on fire.....

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/18/2013 7:24:00 AM

superb Russell and gl in contest Shadow x smiles

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/18/2013 5:55:00 AM

My my my!!! This is superb. Strong entry, Russell. Love your choice of words.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2013 3:14:00 PM

Interesting Tanka that you have penned..Reads like a passionate winner..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2013 12:07:00 PM

oh, simmering lines blaze this page, russell...a passionate write firing the skies; sumptuous and delecteble!.. Fine job!..:)

Skat A

Date: 6/17/2013 11:24:00 AM

Russell, i love the price we pay when it comes to lust. a lovely note. Good luck in the contest. SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 6/17/2013 7:58:00 AM

Wow....