Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

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Raptured

You shall look and seek at the empty bench
Run to the forest path enter in running__fast
But I shall be gone, raptured by__ the poem
The poem that I was not allowed to write in the past

Taken from my poem: A Kiss Instead 6/9/2010
Date: 12-02-2020 __ Raptured
Contest: Liberum Divisa 3
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Constance La France February 18, 2021 at 2:12 PM Sara, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:47 PM Shows your love for writing, enjoyed reading these four lines that speak your mind. Congrats on your win Sara. Hugs ~ Ani Sara Kendrick February 18, 2021 at 4:53 AM Anitha, Thanks for dropping by with congrats and your understanding review. Sara

Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 9:18 AM Intriguing lines, Sara: Outrunning your muse is quite a feat. Congratulations, SuZ Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 10:09 AM Suzanne, I did not have time to write when my children were young too much to do to even think. LOL..I finally found some time to put my thoughts on paper. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2021 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your win. A cute write and picture. I really enjoyed both. Have a blessed day............................. Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 10:05 AM Paula, Yes, that woman is a worker isn't she. Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Sara

JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:59 AM So beautiful Sara! Congratulations!! Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 7:02 AM JCB, I appreciate the kind review. SK

Line Gauthier February 17, 2021 at 6:45 AM lovely, Sara ~ beautiful. Congrats ! Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 7:02 AM Line, I am glad you think it is beautiful. SK

Greg Gaul February 17, 2021 at 6:26 AM Congrats on your fine placement. Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 7:01 AM Greg, Your visit is uplifting. SK

Newton Ranaweera February 17, 2021 at 6:24 AM I am back to congratulate you, Sara, on your placement!! Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 7:01 AM Newton, Ahh!! Thanks..SK

Linda Alice Fowler February 17, 2021 at 6:15 AM Lovely Sara. Congratulations on the win! Linda Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 7:00 AM Linda, Thanks for the congrats. Sara

Carol Mitra February 17, 2021 at 5:04 AM Well done Sara... I liked this one....Congrats on your win :) Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 6:59 AM Carol, I appreciate you dropping by to congratulate me. SK

Jack Horne December 6, 2020 at 12:39 PM intriguing write, my friend Sara Kendrick December 6, 2020 at 2:04 PM Jack, Your presence at my page is always uplifting. SK

Newton Ranaweera December 4, 2020 at 4:36 AM An interesting piece, Sara!! Sara Kendrick December 5, 2020 at 7:43 AM Newton, Glad that it got your interest. Sara

Vijay Pandit December 3, 2020 at 8:00 AM Great poem Sara--the last line makes an impact. Sara Kendrick December 4, 2020 at 1:03 AM Vijay, Thanks for the visit to my page. I am glad you like the last line. Sara

James Horn December 3, 2020 at 7:58 AM Became a poem that disappeared by wayside where no one knows. Maybe God has it in heaven. Not only was bench empty but so was my mind. Have missee you. Corona virus has severely affect our poetry production. Sara Kendrick December 4, 2020 at 1:08 AM James, This virus has everything and everyone flipped upside down but an end is in sight. Thanks for dropping by. We in our household have not had it but one of our daughters and her husband have had it. Sara

Regina Mcintosh December 3, 2020 at 7:37 AM Beautiful entry... Many prayers for your joy this Christmas. God bless you Sara Kendrick December 4, 2020 at 1:04 AM Regina, Thanks for the visit to my page. I think it will be a good year despite the circumstances surrounding 2020. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 2, 2020 at 7:40 PM Being raptured by the poem one has long desired to write, is such a lovely idea, Sara. The picture says a lot, too. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest. :) Sara Kendrick December 3, 2020 at 5:51 AM Evelyn, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here. I am honored that you put it in your favs. Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2020 at 2:40 PM very interesting one, Sara. Thanks for seeing my poem the other day. I am slow getting back these days. Just don't have time to comment each day! Sara Kendrick December 2, 2020 at 3:31 PM Andrea, Your comments are valuable. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Silent One December 2, 2020 at 2:32 PM And now you had a chance to write it...Nice four lines. Sara Kendrick December 2, 2020 at 3:29 PM SO, So it seems I had the time to write it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Victor Buhagiar December 2, 2020 at 9:35 AM Lovely extract, Sara. Best of luck. ~~ Sara Kendrick December 2, 2020 at 10:21 AM Victor, Thanks for the visit. Sara