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You shall look and seek at the empty bench Run to the forest path enter in running__fast But I shall be gone, raptured by__ the poem The poem that I was not allowed to write in the past
Taken from my poem: A Kiss Instead 6/9/2010 Date: 12-02-2020 __ Raptured Contest: Liberum Divisa 3 Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Date: 2/18/2021 2:12:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance
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Date: 2/17/2021 9:47:00 PM
Shows your love for writing, enjoyed reading these four lines that speak your mind. Congrats on your win Sara. Hugs ~ Ani
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2021 4:53:00 AM
Anitha, Thanks for dropping by with congrats and your understanding review. Sara
Date: 2/17/2021 9:18:00 AM
Intriguing lines, Sara: Outrunning your muse is quite a feat. Congratulations, SuZ
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Date: 2/17/2021 10:09:00 AM
Suzanne, I did not have time to write when my children were young too much to do to even think. LOL..I finally found some time to put my thoughts on paper. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 2/17/2021 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute write and picture. I really enjoyed both. Have a blessed day.............................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 10:05:00 AM
Paula, Yes, that woman is a worker isn't she. Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 2/17/2021 6:59:00 AM
So beautiful Sara! Congratulations!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 7:02:00 AM
JCB, I appreciate the kind review. SK
Date: 2/17/2021 6:45:00 AM
lovely, Sara ~ beautiful. Congrats !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 7:02:00 AM
Line, I am glad you think it is beautiful. SK
Date: 2/17/2021 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on your fine placement.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 7:01:00 AM
Greg, Your visit is uplifting. SK
Date: 2/17/2021 6:24:00 AM
I am back to congratulate you, Sara, on your placement!!
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:01:00 AM
Newton, Ahh!! Thanks..SK
Date: 2/17/2021 6:15:00 AM
Lovely Sara. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 7:00:00 AM
Linda, Thanks for the congrats. Sara
Date: 2/17/2021 5:04:00 AM
Well done Sara... I liked this one....Congrats on your win :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2021 6:59:00 AM
Carol, I appreciate you dropping by to congratulate me. SK
Date: 12/6/2020 12:39:00 PM
intriguing write, my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2020 2:04:00 PM
Jack, Your presence at my page is always uplifting. SK
Date: 12/4/2020 4:36:00 AM
An interesting piece, Sara!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2020 7:43:00 AM
Newton, Glad that it got your interest. Sara
Date: 12/3/2020 8:00:00 AM
Great poem Sara--the last line makes an impact.
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Date: 12/4/2020 1:03:00 AM
Vijay, Thanks for the visit to my page. I am glad you like the last line. Sara
Date: 12/3/2020 7:58:00 AM
Became a poem that disappeared by wayside where no one knows. Maybe God has it in heaven. Not only was bench empty but so was my mind. Have missee you. Corona virus has severely affect our poetry production.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2020 1:08:00 AM
James, This virus has everything and everyone flipped upside down but an end is in sight. Thanks for dropping by. We in our household have not had it but one of our daughters and her husband have had it. Sara
Date: 12/3/2020 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful entry... Many prayers for your joy this Christmas. God bless you
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2020 1:04:00 AM
Regina, Thanks for the visit to my page. I think it will be a good year despite the circumstances surrounding 2020. Sara
Date: 12/2/2020 7:40:00 PM
Being raptured by the poem one has long desired to write, is such a lovely idea, Sara. The picture says a lot, too. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2020 5:51:00 AM
Evelyn, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here. I am honored that you put it in your favs. Sara
Date: 12/2/2020 2:40:00 PM
very interesting one, Sara. Thanks for seeing my poem the other day. I am slow getting back these days. Just don't have time to comment each day!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/2/2020 3:31:00 PM
Andrea, Your comments are valuable. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 12/2/2020 2:32:00 PM
And now you had a chance to write it...Nice four lines.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/2/2020 3:29:00 PM
SO, So it seems I had the time to write it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 12/2/2020 9:35:00 AM
Lovely extract, Sara. Best of luck. ~~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/2/2020 10:21:00 AM
Victor, Thanks for the visit. Sara

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