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Rambling, Rundown, Rapture Words Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France

First Place

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Candid and fully exposed as the theatre’s light dims She stands poised, dauntless disciplined and statuesque A stance both stalwart and defiant yet supple are her limbs Mango hued flower, shoulder's thrown back thrusting her breast He sits rapped by intrigue as he studies her movement A silver fox and raven mane is neatly brushed regally back To beautify him further would take divine improvement Only to be bathed in her impassioned embrace does he lack Swirls of sangria red fabric charge like El toro spark undulating trails Laced in pearly white with azure blue print mesmerize and highlight And flow about her generous hips in a rage of billowing canvas sails Flamenco dancers firm legs are revealed in fish nets that boldly invite Whilst her furtive glimpse ignites his cavalier bon vivant smile She bewiles with onyx eyes that glisten and fingers splayed for effect He connects in a flash with a performers come hither guile Upon times eternal river this fiery night's tryst they shall reflect

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Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2024 5:42:00 AM

Anaya, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the image and quote too, Constance

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2024 5:20:00 PM

Belated thank you, dear Constance, sorry I missed this rave review!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/28/2024 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed watching the dance as I read your wonderful write. Have a great/fun day writing away...............

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2024 5:19:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! Sorry I missed this rave review!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/28/2024 6:37:00 AM

I love the heat and passion of flamenco. This phrase "A silver fox and raven mane " - perfect. A fav for me BFF. Also big congratulations! :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/15/2024 5:19:00 PM

Thank you, Linda Alice! Sorry I missed this rave review bff

Valsa George

Date: 2/28/2024 4:38:00 AM

This is poetry of the finest kind, dear Anaya. Sorry for the lack of time that I don't read the poems of many of my favorites here. B/w Did you write the poem seeing the image or did you choose an apt image to go with the poem? "And flow about her generous hips in a rage of billowing canvas sails Flamenco dancer's firm legs are revealed in fish nets that boldly invite" Beautifully sensuous....Indeed fantastic...! Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/28/2024 9:27:00 AM

I found the perfect image to complement my already formed desires & experiences as a flamenco dancer in my youth, Valsa. My mother was very creative and loved flamenco dancing and put me in routines with her. "Sonnet For Gloria" Many of the terms I've become acquainted with the terms here on PS. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings~Anaya

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/27/2024 11:25:00 PM

Exquisite poem my friend. Congrats on a well deserved win. Flamenco dancers are so exciting and poised and you described her to a tee. Just beautiful.

Jay Narain

Date: 2/27/2024 9:04:00 AM

Hello Anaya. Nice to find your poem in the winner list. Beautiful poem.

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/27/2024 9:20:00 AM

I'm overjoyed, Jay. Congratulations on your win as well!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/21/2024 7:19:00 PM

You made this poem dance on the page~and as intoxicating as Sangria! Hugs, Pangie xx

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/22/2024 8:58:00 AM

Delighted you enjoyed Pangie! xo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/20/2024 11:53:00 AM

I love Spanish dancing. The tapping of shoes, the swirl of wide skirts, so colorful. The sound of the castanets. So romantic. So beautiful.

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/20/2024 2:15:00 PM

So do I! I grew up with it. Thank you for your visit. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/20/2024 11:30:00 AM

What a wonderful twirling, fiery picture of romance all dressed up in the metaphor of the sensual "flamenco" inspired by Susan's energy charged poem. This poem literally dances off of the page! I agree with Susan - "Ole!" You have written a deeply emotional piece in colors that twirl in the colors and images of sangria. Wonderful word pairings. Really enjoyed this romantic slice of life written from both perspectives! Blessings!

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/20/2024 2:17:00 PM

Both perspectives, hoping that it's rapture, the contest requires, Sam. I'm delighted that you enjoyed. I am grateful for you pointing out what you like my poetess friend. Blessings

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/19/2024 6:35:00 PM

Dear Anaya, rapture, indeed! Such a passionate portrayal of the fiery flamenco dancer and her ardent admirer! Beautiful, lyrical verse, love the rhymes, and so enjoyed the dynamic, dramatic imagery "Swirls of sangria red fabric charge like El toro." - ¡Olé! A fantastic piece, your poetic pen blazes hotter than the sun, dear poetess. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan P.S. a beautiful painting too!

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/20/2024 2:18:00 PM

Susan Ashley
Date: 2/19/2024 7:18:00 PM

Ah, shared inspiration is the best inspiration. I am both touched and thrilled to know that your wondrous work of art was inspired by “Wild Mango Fandango”. Thank you my friend..

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/19/2024 6:50:00 PM

Ah, 'twas your luscious "Wild Mango Fandango" trophy win that inspired this one, Susan, chévere ! I just loved it. Thank you, ¡Olé! aha Anaya