Random Thoughts *32* Acrostic

"MABAS"



Meant to create famine & war> prophecies of 
Armageddon caused by this plague called man.
Deemed, foreseen as the
Anti-Christ< in death, becomes a martyr.
Said to jump start World War three...

[mabas--------sadam]


Jared Pickett
11/17/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 10:43 AM
This is a very poignant acrostic and wonderfully done Jared. Thanks for sharing...I see that the apple does not fall far from the tree...~Mary
Pickett Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Provokes thought...Well written... Good job son...Dad
Sullivan Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 11:50 PM
wow I love all your work your such an amazing writer
La France Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 8:43 PM
fierce and passionate writing Jared...thanks so much for your comment on my poem I Pray... I am happy you liked it.
Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Deep subject Jared, super write i have to say >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Intense and thought provoking free verse, Jared... interesting play on words.. u r Asavvy 1.. like my car tag .. EXPNSV 1 .. great minds think alike... luv.. thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry too... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Burton Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 9:19 AM
wow.... hope that comes later, short and deep poetry.... don't think that will ever come until years for now, but that something. Enjoyed this and enjoy your day :)
Moreno Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 12:10 AM
Nice acrostic, I have a question though. In the middle line of the poem, does it start with a 'D' or is it suppose to start with a 'B' like the word in the parenthesis above?
Delacroix Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Chilly thoughts. Prophetical write. Interesting acrostic to Sadam. Thanks for sharing your Random Thoughts. Caroline.
Sheart Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Obviously we are all part of something bigger than ourselves, still , I think the world is what we ourselves make of it through all good and bad. Very thought provoking poem Jared. Truly enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Patty I don't think this guy is a martyr for his people even though he and his people do. Not all of them think that way either but...I could go on and on.................!
Chircop Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Yes men are the plague:)lol,we are our own plague Savvy..Our future depends on us..Hope Prophecies are wrong.i read Nostradamus,its scary.. very scary.. and We are making the world Scary by all these Never ending Wars..the future,Who knows?intersting Write ..Charma
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November 17, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Thought provoking poem. We live in scary times where people don't seem to value life. Interesting use of the challenging acrostic form. Keep on writing and sharing your poetry with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 10:59 AM
Interesting topic of that you have chosen. I saw your drawing computer generated. It was an interesting design. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 9:00 AM
enjoyed, interesting subject, ben laden is still out there, reckon where he is?
Freeman Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Unique creation Jared, man has certainly become a plague, in God's feast of charity. Sincerely, Moses
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