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Random Thoughts 32 Acrostic

"MABAS"



Meant to create famine & war> prophecies of 
Armageddon caused by this plague called man.
Deemed, foreseen as the
Anti-Christ< in death, becomes a martyr.
Said to jump start World War three...

[mabas--------sadam]


Jared Pickett
11/17/09
Asavvy1

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/3/2009 10:43:00 AM

This is a very poignant acrostic and wonderfully done Jared. Thanks for sharing...I see that the apple does not fall far from the tree...~Mary

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/1/2009 7:19:00 AM

Provokes thought...Well written... Good job son...Dad

Rachel Sullivan

Date: 11/20/2009 11:50:00 PM

wow I love all your work your such an amazing writer

Constance La France

Date: 11/20/2009 8:43:00 PM

fierce and passionate writing Jared...thanks so much for your comment on my poem I Pray... I am happy you liked it.

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2009 12:46:00 PM

Deep subject Jared, super write i have to say >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2009 5:04:00 PM

Intense and thought provoking free verse, Jared... interesting play on words.. u r Asavvy 1.. like my car tag .. EXPNSV 1 .. great minds think alike... luv.. thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry too... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Derrick Burton

Date: 11/19/2009 9:19:00 AM

wow.... hope that comes later, short and deep poetry.... don't think that will ever come until years for now, but that something. Enjoyed this and enjoy your day :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/19/2009 12:10:00 AM

Nice acrostic, I have a question though. In the middle line of the poem, does it start with a 'D' or is it suppose to start with a 'B' like the word in the parenthesis above?

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/18/2009 10:22:00 AM

Chilly thoughts. Prophetical write. Interesting acrostic to Sadam. Thanks for sharing your Random Thoughts. Caroline.

P Sheart

Date: 11/17/2009 5:22:00 PM

Obviously we are all part of something bigger than ourselves, still , I think the world is what we ourselves make of it through all good and bad. Very thought provoking poem Jared. Truly enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Patty I don't think this guy is a martyr for his people even though he and his people do. Not all of them think that way either but...I could go on and on.................!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/17/2009 1:43:00 PM

Yes men are the plague:)lol,we are our own plague Savvy..Our future depends on us..Hope Prophecies are wrong.i read Nostradamus,its scary.. very scary.. and We are making the world Scary by all these Never ending Wars..the future,Who knows?intersting Write ..Charma

Date: 11/17/2009 1:43:00 PM

Thought provoking poem. We live in scary times where people don't seem to value life. Interesting use of the challenging acrostic form. Keep on writing and sharing your poetry with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2009 10:59:00 AM

Interesting topic of that you have chosen. I saw your drawing computer generated. It was an interesting design. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara