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Yet the sound of the pounding rain Continues alongside the shining sun Old wounds reopen causing pain Perhaps not a day well done I don't mind the rain as it plays Its instrumental tunes Wisdom told in a hundred ways Warning of wasted afternoons The pounding rain can't crush me It can only wake me from my sleep Remind me how I can be free As slowly whispered messages seep I see the rain, I hear the sound Feel it on my skin, it brings me round Reminds me of promises, to which I'm bound The wonder of life still does astound

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Date: 6/14/2023 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win DD! So gentle and profound.
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Date: 6/14/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Anaya - I appreciate your kind words
Date: 6/13/2023 5:05:00 PM
I love, wisdom told in a hundred ways, beautiful writing, congrats!!
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thanks H x
Date: 6/13/2023 2:48:00 PM
"The pounding rain can't crush me." is the best line. So many people let the rain crush them. Anyways congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/13/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Miranda, that was my fave too - thanks for contest and placement x

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