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The grass is green The sky is blue Roses are red This is all true But then one day While looking for my soul I looked up high The sky was so dull The trees swing low Water no longer shimmers The boats don't float Colours get dimmer Days get darker Cuts get deeper I scream for help They call me the weeper I go to sleep Carrying my sorrow Tossing and turn Hoping it's better tomorrow

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Evan Law

Date: 11/27/2018 3:47:00 PM

What type of poem is her poem

Skat A

Date: 6/27/2015 1:32:00 AM

Destiny, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2015 5:10:00 PM

Destiny, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2015 4:26:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Destiny :) - Most arts demands training (we learn from each other), for me it is important to share and delight others - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us - I wish you good luck: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:12:00 PM

Destiny, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT