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"Rambling is a mood enhancer and it is during my ramblings that Nature talks to me in inaudible whispers and I am struck by the silent beauty around me" _By Poet As the shadows began lengthening, I slowly walked to the seashore, Through the cobbled path, With stinging stones under my feet, And piles of golden clouds floating above, Enjoying the whistling of the wind through the reeds, Inhaling the saline air, smelling of rotting seaweeds. Along the margin of the vast strand, I rambled for long Feeling the foamy fringes of water lapping at my feet And sensing the sand slipping away under my feet I watched the gentle undulating billows. Rolling their silver volumes As if to die away on the happy shores The sapphire waters and the roaring waves The churning tides and the feathery foam Made me wonder at the horror and beauty, That inbred dichotomy Nature carries within With such surreal beauty surrounding me I yearn to ramble on and on till the end of time, Like a recluse with only the company of the sea at my side The wet sand under my feet and the clouds above my head! April.5. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Writing Challenge ‘R’ Words Poetry Contest Sponsor. Constance La France

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Date: 4/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
- I see a beautiful picture with your lines, Valsa... congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/7/2023 8:00:00 AM
I could easily travel the path you've woven Valsa. Nicely cone! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/6/2023 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations Valsa on such a well deserved 1st place for such a beautiful poem
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Date: 4/6/2023 8:53:00 PM
A very great and beautiful scene, picturesquely illustrated. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/6/2023 8:21:00 PM
Valsa, outstanding writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Date: 4/7/2023 4:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Constance that my poem is appealing to you. So grateful that it is given a first place win
Date: 4/6/2023 8:12:00 PM
Unable to quit pondering this insightful poem; your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win dear Valsa.
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Date: 4/6/2023 11:18:00 AM
A wonderful write/picture/quote. Wish I was walking on your beach. Good Luck. Have a great/blessed day...........
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Date: 4/5/2023 12:43:00 PM
such intelligent writing and use of good descriptive words. Sure to get a great placement, Valsa.
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Date: 4/5/2023 10:28:00 AM
Wow, what a beautiful, graceful scene you have given us all to enjoy : ). Love it
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:37:00 AM
Aww Valsa what a calm captivating poem….it took me there! I just love the word Ramble so the Title drew me in! Debx
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Date: 4/5/2023 6:46:00 AM
This is truly a calming poem, Valsa. A wondrous walk. Nicely penned. Have a great day:)
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Date: 4/5/2023 6:32:00 AM
so refreshing and both deep, i love it , and can feel the sand under my feet, and the questions too, great penning, thanks
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Date: 4/5/2023 6:14:00 AM
Enjoyed the ride by the ocean through your words, Valsa. Much beauty and serenity you convey-- ambling and rejoicing in realm of nature.
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Date: 4/5/2023 4:42:00 AM
Expressions of beauty and surprises such as “ Made me wonder at the horror and beauty, That inbred dichotomy Nature carries within” Love your poetry, Valsa!
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