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Rambling

"Rambling is a mood enhancer and it is during my ramblings that Nature talks to me in inaudible whispers and I am struck by the silent beauty around me"
                                                                                           _By Poet


As the shadows began lengthening,
I slowly walked to the seashore,
Through the cobbled path,
With stinging stones under my feet,
And piles of golden clouds floating above,
Enjoying the whistling of the wind through the reeds,
Inhaling the saline air, smelling of rotting seaweeds.

Along the margin of the vast strand, I rambled for long
Feeling the foamy fringes of water lapping at my feet
And sensing the sand slipping away under my feet
I watched the gentle undulating billows.
Rolling their silver volumes
As if to die away on the happy shores

The sapphire waters and the roaring waves
The churning tides and the feathery foam
Made me wonder at the horror and beauty,
That inbred dichotomy Nature carries within

With such surreal beauty surrounding me
I yearn to ramble on and on till the end of time,
Like a recluse with only the company of the sea at my side
The wet sand under my feet and the clouds above my head!

April.5. 2023

~ Placed First~

Writing Challenge ‘R’ Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:37 PM
- I see a beautiful picture with your lines, Valsa... congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 8:00 AM
I could easily travel the path you've woven Valsa. Nicely cone! Congratulations on your win! :)
Volumes Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 10:01 PM
Congratulations Valsa on such a well deserved 1st place for such a beautiful poem
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:53 PM
A very great and beautiful scene, picturesquely illustrated. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Valsa, outstanding writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 4:09 AM
Thanks a lot dear Constance that my poem is appealing to you. So grateful that it is given a first place win
Poet Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Unable to quit pondering this insightful poem; your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win dear Valsa.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 11:18 AM
A wonderful write/picture/quote. Wish I was walking on your beach. Good Luck. Have a great/blessed day...........
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 12:43 PM
such intelligent writing and use of good descriptive words. Sure to get a great placement, Valsa.
McBride  Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Wow, what a beautiful, graceful scene you have given us all to enjoy : ). Love it
M  Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Aww Valsa what a calm captivating poem….it took me there! I just love the word Ramble so the Title drew me in! Debx
Turner Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 6:46 AM
This is truly a calming poem, Valsa. A wondrous walk. Nicely penned. Have a great day:)
Rolland Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 6:32 AM
so refreshing and both deep, i love it , and can feel the sand under my feet, and the questions too, great penning, thanks
Pandit Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Enjoyed the ride by the ocean through your words, Valsa. Much beauty and serenity you convey-- ambling and rejoicing in realm of nature.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 4:42 AM
Expressions of beauty and surprises such as “ Made me wonder at the horror and beauty, That inbred dichotomy Nature carries within” Love your poetry, Valsa!
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