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Rainy Gray Friday

On a rainy gray Friday I sat and thought of you; thought of prices paid just for your company; thought of lonely days, silent days, lengthened days, with no sight or sound of you. It’s not the past I fear, but the future I dread. A future with no certainty except of pain and longing, never satisfied, eased only for moments, reappearing stronger for the respite. Submitted Aug 30, 2016

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Date: 8/31/2016 12:28:00 AM
POignant, and bleak, but since it was written a while ago, I hope the future has been a little rosier. Lovely write, Beverly. Viv x
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Date: 8/31/2016 11:18:00 AM
The future has been a lot rosier. There have been no such sad Fridays in my new long lifetime. But what empathy the experience taught me!
Date: 8/30/2016 3:41:00 PM
it has a nice melancholy feel to it Beverly. A moment in time that I have been at as well.
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Date: 8/31/2016 11:20:00 AM
It was very melancholy and I can easily remember my state of mind. It keeps me thankful for my now.
Date: 8/30/2016 2:46:00 PM
nice pen, Louis.
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thank you, Louis.

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