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Rainy Days

She drizzles on mounds of brick stones Her tresses pouring like silvery mist Robed in a veil of pewter and crystals, Fragrant breath spreading a tune Across the glossed moorland lushly blazed; Till she refreshes the prism of grass Enchanting the eyes from sterling clouds While barefoot kids fondle her taps. In October's daze, winds start to prance As ripened boughs pop confetti of dew... With her voice waltzing across the sky, She delivers a lining in float of mist To gather hues from a wondrous ride As puddles beneath trickles a glow… Oh, the youngest daughter of Rain Coasts on moistened stars; then to fade in grace.
Rain Contest For Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/24/2015 4:06:00 PM
My friend, congratulations on writing such a great poem and your win with that excellent creation!!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:13:00 AM
NETTE, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 1:51:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write nette!
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Date: 12/23/2015 4:21:00 PM
So beautifully written, Nette. Congratulations on your podium placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:09:00 PM
"As ripened boughs pop confetti of dew..." This and the many other fine lines cover the reader in a misty magic. Staggering write Nette - well done
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:56:00 AM
Superb, congrats, nette.e
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:14:00 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem - Congratulations, dear Nette! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette, I love this beautifully crafted poem.
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Date: 10/10/2014 5:43:00 AM
Nicely used imagery, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/10/2014 4:15:00 AM
amazing personification in this beautiful write. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Nette. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:40:00 AM
Reading this gem makes me long for many more rainy days to enjoy.
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Date: 9/15/2014 11:21:00 AM
amazingly crafted poem for rainy day...walang kupas! hope all is well after the hard rainy days that passed in your province... ^_6
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:27:00 AM
beautifully written and a magical use of imagery... this show a great poet in you.. hugs.. malik
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Date: 9/13/2014 11:39:00 PM
This is very beautiful and well written, also great for the contest... Lucilla
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:56:00 PM
Simply gorgeous !! Descriptions are wonderful (pewter veil of rain!)....love it ! and ps.......a big thank you for my placement in the Florette contest !! I'm so pleased!!
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Date: 9/13/2014 11:36:00 AM
Wonderful poetry that would make any rainy day lovely. I simply love to read your writing. Good luck in the contest Princess, James :)
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Date: 9/13/2014 8:45:00 AM
So rich with imagery nette...love it...hugs Tim
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:37:00 AM
- Beautifully written ..... dance in the rain my dear friend,Nette :) - Thank you - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2014 1:06:00 AM
Loved it so much, had to read it once again to enjoy the poem fully! Confetti is so you nette... love you
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:02:00 PM
Divine Nette, you are special! Well done and GL
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Date: 9/12/2014 5:59:00 PM
There are poets who write, then there are poets who write poetry, you write poetry my poetic friend, your words choices are creative and beautiful...well done..good luck
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Date: 9/12/2014 4:31:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I have read a few of these and they are all very good..It will be stiff competition..Thanks for the visit to my page..Soup Mail soon..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2014 3:48:00 PM
A stellar write Nette..Too bad it can't rain everyday!
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Date: 9/12/2014 2:02:00 PM
Giving human attributes to the rain in its scenic moments is spectacular. What an excellent personification.
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