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Rainy Day Kisses

Rainy day kisses Rainy day kisses and misted cloud streamers Puddles reflecting the sky Love drizzled showers on thunderstorm dreamers Dampness collects in a sigh Here in your arms midst the drops slowly falling Wet on your lips I embrace Hearing the echoes our heartbeats are calling Melodic minutes now trace Touching your skin in a shimmering fashion Glistening sweet my caress Drenched in the waters of unending passion Drowned is devotion’s confess For here we stand ‘neath these skies steady pouring Immersed in the moisture of bliss Soaked with desire, the one I’m adoring Sharing a rainy day kiss 10/17/18 Written for the Tell Me A Story Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/22/2019 4:08:00 AM

Ahhh I remember this one well! It blew me away then as it does again! Chris really your poetry is truly special!;) Hope you don't mind drifting down your memory lane again! I really hate that I deleted my account because my comments are gone! But.... I get to revisit them again!;)

Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 11/9/2018 1:55:00 PM

Lovely win my friend xxx

Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2018 7:50:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/1/2018 3:26:00 PM

Your romantic poem flows beautifully along with excellent meter and rhythm, Chris! Congrats on your top win! :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 3:38:00 PM

Thank you so very much Laura. I am thrilled you liked this one

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/1/2018 8:20:00 AM

Gorgeousness :) Congratulations on your win! xomo

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 10:49:00 AM

Thank you so much my good friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2018 7:32:00 AM

A beauty! Love the opening line! Congratulations on first place, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Kim for always being so nice to me

Wendy Nipas

Date: 11/1/2018 7:05:00 AM

Beautiful wording, beautiful story. Congrats on your win.

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Wendy. I am happy you enjoyed this.

Jerry Hackett

Date: 11/1/2018 5:30:00 AM

Very cool

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Jerry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2018 12:06:00 AM

Gorgeous, just gorgeous, and congrats on a very well deserved win.

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much Andrea. I am glad you liked it

Just James

Date: 10/24/2018 6:55:00 AM

This is so well written with meter and structure adding to the raindrop scene, this is such a great write loved it.

Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thanks so very much James. I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem

Wendy Watson

Date: 10/18/2018 4:17:00 PM

That initial 'raindrops on roses ......' rhythmic feeling again, Chris! I love it! You capture the picture's romantic ambience beautifully. Wendy

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Wendy. I'm thrilled you liked this one. Maybe I should write one about "Whiskers on kittens" : ) Thanks again my friend.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/17/2018 11:20:00 PM

This captures the feeling in Brenda's picture so well, also sure it will place high in her contest!

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you so very much Michelle. I am thrilled you liked it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2018 8:53:00 PM

Brenda is going to adore this one, much as I do. See you at the top of the podium where you and this podium belong. So well-done! Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you again my friend for all of the nice things you say about my poetry. I appreciate your visits.