Rainstorm

Summer Rain Rainstorm Midsummer’s voice bellows in the thunder. It’s deep and husky as the heat is high. Skylights flash in atmospheric wonder, to clearly say a storm is passing by. Forceful winds tear weak trees all asunder, as the rain pours like silver from the sky. Summer rain doesn’t like to fall alone. It brings thunder to liven up the tone. 6/19/17
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Date: 6/27/2017 12:40:00 AM
Powerful imagery there, Janis. Congrats on your win with this fine poem.
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Date: 6/26/2017 12:37:00 AM
Wow! A thunderous write, Janis, congratulations:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/26/2017 9:20:00 PM
Thanks, Jo.
Date: 6/20/2017 2:08:00 AM
Great Ottave Rima. I love the Italian rhymes a lot, Terza Rima being my personal favorite.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/22/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Darren.
Date: 6/20/2017 1:13:00 AM
Wow Janice thanks for blogging about the syllable count or I may have missed this gem!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/22/2017 2:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.
Date: 6/19/2017 7:22:00 PM
I think I've tried this form only once before but did not do it justice as you have done! A booming beauty!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/19/2017 9:22:00 PM
Read my blog. I have some suggestions.
Date: 6/19/2017 6:37:00 PM
Very well done. I can feel the stifling humidity even with the rain. and no matter what I do I can't dry off after a shower.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/19/2017 9:23:00 PM
It sounds like you live in a humid place. Blessings, Janis.
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