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Rainsticks and Drums Native Chants and Pagan Dreams

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Amazon mist and rainy mornings green as the day God made them dropping from a moist sky full of even grays and sheltering light peaceful music playing from the spheres of a dense forest dream we are little humans in a big big giant cave, .... the rain Pitter patter drops on thirsty tree in a world that is evened once again sheets of rain fall from my window and I click click click and glean a slow memory of old, photographs of mom and dad inside the garden we were small and happily drinking in the scene .... the rain Sentinel watches from soldiering evergreens I lived there before the white washed walls of peace and the age old chanterelle danced as the raindrops settle in my soul, I compose a poem about downpour Petrichor scents permeate my living space as I listen to ... the rain Rainsticks and drums Native chants and Pagan dreams of old I remember Lady Gianne and her healing chants, how she lifted her face to the winds "Heal me now and make me whole" * " Bring peace and love forevermore" As nature creates pathways to equity, the rain loves US, .... the rain

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/23/2022 6:49:00 AM

Enchanting, with a pleasing mellowness. Nice one Vie. :) Linda

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/24/2022 6:42:00 PM

I have always loved nature and the forest, it brings out the best in me, thanks for reading Linda, much appreciative :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/22/2022 2:50:00 PM

nature's rain can be tender and can be violent, it can be warm and inviting, and it can be terrifying...your poem expressed its tender side...a very calming poem

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2022 3:21:00 PM

Yes indeed Frederic, rain can help us or hinder us, thank you for dropping by and commenting, have a blessed day

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/22/2022 11:31:00 AM

You used all the necessities for sound color, and imagery. Most beautiful. Hugs..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2022 3:21:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Victor, praying that the trees get enough and the flowers too,

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/22/2022 11:05:00 AM

The rain has a knack for falling at the wrong time in the wrong place, but we would not exist without it! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2022 3:20:00 PM

Yes lately it seems that one part of the world has too much and the other has none lol , I think someone is messing with mother nature , or something ... thanks for reading Rico

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2022 10:53:00 AM

Lovely piece and a great job with the narration.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2022 3:19:00 PM

Thankyou for dropping by my poetry Richard, much appreciated

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/22/2022 7:05:00 AM

Your poem sounds so so beautiful and soothing in your delicate rhythmic voice. Much enjoyed my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2022 3:19:00 PM

Woke up this morning to a sheet of rain, and it helped set the mode, thank you for reading Vijay