Rains

RAINS Rains! Drizzling. Small droplets forming ripples on running river in concentric circles growing bigger decaying reforming recreating restless. Sunset transcends twilight fading in tranquility on somber solitude I am sensing smelling sadness of sky releasing in cries of bursting clouds. I am blending tears with raindrops. Soon evening will merge to night. I will wait for the dawn glowing with Sunrise on crimson red. Sky and I will feel fresh. Form Double Etheree 08/12/16 Contest Form E by Broken Wings

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/24/2017 6:00:00 PM

Hi Anisha, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2016 5:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Anisha, thank you for entering my contest ! Hug Eve

Lu Loo

Date: 8/15/2016 5:00:00 PM

Anisha, beautiful etheree...congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 8:02:00 PM

what a wonderful creative write Anisha - love the way you formed this into a raindrop - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/13/2016 9:33:00 AM

Beautifully designed and written!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:55:00 AM

Oh, it's so cool how you made the etheree into a rain drop, very creative use of double etheree!!