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Raindrops On My Window

What a joy! Look ahoy! Rain is here, Freshness clear, God’s blessing! Earth’s dressing! Watch the rain Fill my lane! Pitter pat, Pitter pat! Listen, folks, Lilting strokes! Raindrops fall, Gently call! Teasing me, Pleasing me, In the storm, Puddles form, Down it pours, Thunder roars, Lightning bright, Sky alight! Let’s all hum, Rain has come! written on 29th November, 2021 (3 syllables per line)

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Kim Merryman

Date: 1/13/2022 6:10:00 AM

A fun, rhythmic, celebratory write, Jo! You can feel the excitement in it. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2022 4:06:00 PM

this is just great, Joy. And congrats. Well deserved.

Gary Radice

Date: 1/11/2022 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's recent contest Jo. Your words describe the rain so well. Cheers - gary

Deb M

Date: 1/10/2022 8:14:00 PM

I love this Jo…..it flows beautifully(like the rain hehe) and had a happy feel to it! Debx

Jan Allison

Date: 1/10/2022 12:00:00 PM

what a charming poem about the rain love the imagery and use of onomatopoeia :-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/10/2022 6:42:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem. I also thought the lay out looked like a key hole. Which I also thought was pretty cool. Congratulations on your winning placement.