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----Until this time, I thank God for giving this gift of poetry... Inspired by one of the many Biblical Verses I love: 1 Peter 4:10 ===As each one has received a special gift, employ it in serving one another as good stewards of the manifold grace of God... Thank You, Father God.. =')

RAINDROPS OF IMMORTALITY Smiles were stolen from me long time ago Days gone gray as storms rush to play: my... They drain. Fervently, I called to the Heavens but it seems no one there. No one there! I lullaby with the whine of gushing winds, hoping they are kind enough to blow my notes. Notes carrying cries when am still a child as 'til this day, I yearn for father's love... I face every facets of life in color white, some brushed my lips with grins and laughter, some stitched the screams of November yet passed they left footprints to remember. There in the azure ambiance, love's dare~ I bit the chance but sadly I fell distant, my sweet red heart weep from bitter thrusts. Easing emptiness within, I refuse to be a victim. I prayed, pleading always for a Saviour kiss just maybe through it, I might die in peace. (Is death the better surrendering deliverance? Or just an acrid escape for suicidal goodbyes?) I chose God for I prefer to love and live into poetry I began rhyming a letting go the quill of a poetess, I bravely try: verses and lyrics my healing balm... Tossed flowers from the changing seasons and so the smells of pancakes and cafe flirt slatternly to my imagination bursting from me a ballad or a sonnet. But oh! Poetic finesse is a gold in a mine hence, I dig, dive to curves and loops presenting always my jolly descent views... Others said images I present confuse, they don't know, they are the nightmares creeping, shaking my lethargic muse. Written free, I asked you to read carefully~ I send messages of love, beauty and maladies... My pen scribbles mom ore unchained melodies for my heart slowly erects from slumber. It somersaults upon the breaking swell of sunrise in this tediously solitary realm of the world. The horrible webs of yesterday's frustrations I untangled from life's hullabaloos... Shattered dreams into my ink, I shall reform unencompassable inspirations, I want to rouse. Grace from God refilled, it empowered my life surging heartbeats pushed me to clamor for change. I stand to blossom amidst imprisoning trials yet never forgetting my humble ground. Coupled with the will to survive all strifes let my living be mirrored to pages and when breath of life is cut from me let my pen be raindrops of immortality. ____________________________________________________________ Sponsor Name: Silent One Contest Name: Your final poem ~~3rd Place~~ ++ POEM of the DAY ~ August 30, 2015 ++ © Olive Eloisa Guillermo 10:57 pm. August 28, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2016 12:50:00 AM

Olive, Congrats on your poetry win. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 9:37:00 AM

Olive, Congratulations on your nice win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I'm taking, this time, to explain how I really enjoyed every entry. I truly wanted to place every poem, but two with high placements. However, it is a contest and with all the bickering going on about the way we judge our contest. I did not place everyone the way I wanted to in this contest. I do APOLOGIZE. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed high. Stop by my latest Blog "Favorite Type of Poem" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate by sharing with us, Your Favorite type of poem. Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 9:36:00 AM

Olive, thank you for the blessed entry... SKAT

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2015 11:48:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/23/2015 9:47:00 PM

thanks much Skat... =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2015 3:15:00 PM

This is heartfelt and beautiful, Olive_eloi! Poetry has served you well; it has been a faithful companion that stood by you in rough and troubled times; and it is still with you now that life smiles back at you! ~ Congrats on POTD. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/17/2015 1:28:00 AM

You're 100% right Paul, thanks to God... Poetry has been my healing balm..=`)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/1/2015 3:09:00 PM

A well and a lovely write... I love the flow of your write, it's sweet and beautiful and congrats for being featured........A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 2:04:00 AM

thank you so much Afolabi..=`) im so glad with your sweet comment.. =`)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/30/2015 10:18:00 PM

Congrats on ur winning wonderful write dear Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/15/2015 4:19:00 AM

thank you so much Dr. Upma.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2015 8:54:00 PM

and now POTD I see!!! BIG BIG congrats!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2015 5:12:00 AM

thanks much Andie i think yours was also chosen.. =`)

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/30/2015 5:44:00 PM

CONGRATS ON POTD! I hope you were surprised, delighted, and encouraged! Enjoy and Celebrate!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 2:37:00 AM

thank you so much.. I felt ALL Those.. :D

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W

Date: 8/30/2015 12:33:00 PM

Great job of inscribing the essence of poetry here.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:24:00 AM

thanks much mniwmniw.. :D~ your name i find it cute.. =`)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/30/2015 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on Poem Of The Day Hugs Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:20:00 AM

thanks much Eve.. =`)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2015 11:26:00 AM

Olive, l just stopped by to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-)Alexis 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:19:00 AM

thank you so much Alexis.. =`)~O.E.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2015 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD and your win in Silent Ones Contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:18:00 AM

thank you so much Richard... =`)~Olive Eloisa

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/30/2015 7:51:00 AM

Excellent. beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2015 8:54:00 AM

Ravi thanks much. .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2015 6:26:00 AM

- What a beautiful poem, dear Olive - Enjoy reading it from the first to the last line - I'm so glad that I found this on this page: p.o.t.d. ! - CONGRATULATIONS !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2015 8:51:00 AM

Anne Lise, thank you so much for your kind comment.. =`)

Franco Gonza

Date: 8/30/2015 3:41:00 AM

Sublime poetry! Congratulations on your award!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2015 8:52:00 AM

Thanks much Franco.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2015 10:01:00 PM

Olive, I can see that Silent One really loves imagery because yours is flooded with it! You did him JUST what he asked of us for this challenge and garnered a well deserved place in the contest. Big congratulations to you!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/31/2015 7:44:00 AM

Andie thank you so much for your comment... =') its encouraging,, and congrats too.. =')!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/29/2015 6:34:00 PM

Wow, congrats on your win...such a deserving and awesome write!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/31/2015 7:40:00 AM

Cassie thanks for dropping by.. =')

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/29/2015 6:10:00 PM

Wow!!!! What a lovely and excellent write, your write flows eloquent in the heart of the readers...... Beautiful....... I thank the Mighty for you..........A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2015 8:25:00 AM

Afolabi thank you so much!!! :D booster comment! =')

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/29/2015 1:15:00 AM

Olive, your God given imaginative gift of expressive poetic words just blossoms in this beautiful poem! I am in awe of your unique and wonderful words, sweet one! A 7 and so thankful you are a believer! Keep spreading the Good News of God's love, dear :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2015 8:21:00 AM

Laura, thank you so much... =') Eversince, I started writing again, its my thoughts and wanting that in any possible way I will try to make it a mark and express it... I put my barrier down... thanks much! ~Olive Eloisa

James Fraser

Date: 8/28/2015 2:21:00 PM

The more one reads this, the more striking it becomes. The last line is a killer, terrific line little one. Love it, to my fav's~hugs always//James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2015 8:11:00 AM

James, remember the night we are talking and I send you some of the parts of this poem... =') this is my longest poem so far... :D I didn't even know that it will turn up as long as it is.. not because it is the requirement of the sponsor in the contest but because I don't know where to place the title.. :D! hehehe.. :D thanks! hugsxxxxxx~Olive Eloisa :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2015 7:57:00 AM

I am ok Nette thanks.. :D thank you for a generous comment... =')

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2015 2:11:00 PM

heartwarming in every sense of the word, eloi... your spirituality blooms through this engaging write with an ending that caps the whole feel of this piece!.. kamusta na?.. will text you soon!..huggs

Constance La France

Date: 8/28/2015 1:13:00 PM

Olive, beautiful penned poem with many wonderful lines A7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/29/2015 5:50:00 PM

Broken Wings thank you so much.. yours is brautiful too... i love dropping in your page... =`) thanks much...

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/28/2015 10:15:00 AM

Very well expressed with emotions that wrap themselves around your words evoking a sad feeling that pulls at the reader's heart strings. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/29/2015 7:23:00 AM

Hi Emile, thank you so much for dropping by and leaving comment generously........ Your comments are much appreciated.. =')~