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Raindrops

Shimmering green leaves with raindrops, shine in the sun The raindrops wash away all of my lingering worries One by one, united, as many softly fall in the morning It is going to be a nice, clean, refreshing day The plants are thankful and I am thankful There is peace shining in the quiet, still, air I am ready for change, to grow with the plants I am ready for wisdom to touch me like rain, oh, welcome me! These raindrops land softly as they clear my mind One hangs from a thin branch, ready to let go Everything is easier, when focused on simplicity New raindrops are released for everyone to see! Heidi Sands 7/1/24 Placed 1st in Raindrops 2 contest.

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Date: 7/16/2024 1:24:00 PM
Such a hopeful write, Heidi! Makes one feel good! Congrats!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2024 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 7/16/2024 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Raindrops" write. The rain gives everything a drink/bath as it cleans the air. We need rain here. Hope you are OK... Have a wonderful day with your win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2024 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula. Yes, many areas need rain. I hope you are well. Hugs :)
Date: 7/14/2024 10:10:00 PM
"Everything is easier, when focused on simplicity" - A very creative work. Congratulations!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2024 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 7/14/2024 9:01:00 PM
'Peace shining in the quiet, still, air' so beautiful dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 7/14/2024 10:15:00 AM
Great poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Jay :)
Date: 7/14/2024 9:30:00 AM
A good reminder to be grateful! Congratulations! Xo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thabk you Crystol :)
Date: 7/6/2024 8:28:00 PM
Very nice.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2024 5:15:00 AM
Thank you :)

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