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Rainbow Promise


He has announced his arrival. She waits,
Listening to the thunder cracking through
the layers of air. Looking at the lightning,
brightening and frightening the darkness away,
Lapping up the sweet petrichor that comes her way.
He gushes and rushes down to meet her.
In warm welcome, she opens up
to quench her unsatisfied thirst.
The twain meet and a silence follows,
As thick as the mist that envelops this inexplicable gloom.
Emotions flood the watery lane...
His constant showers drench her very soul...
New life awakens as old lives are cleansed, refreshed.
The earth has had her fill...
For now...
Drip... drip... drip...
Slowly the gentleman rain recedes...
He will come...yet again...to meet her...
With this rainbow promise, they part...



06/08/16  -- 123 words


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Date: 11/9/2018 11:02:00 PM
A lovely personification of nature's wonders Jo! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/9/2018 10:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jo. Well done.
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Date: 11/9/2018 7:32:00 PM
Your unique and creative approach to the subject of rainbows is superb, Jo! Loved this! :)
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Date: 11/9/2018 6:40:00 PM
Jo, this would have scored high but you didn't follow the rule of no special fonts - sorry.
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:12:00 AM
Beautiful. Love the personification and the imagery of the "thunder cracking through the layers of air". And I just learned a new valuable word "sweet petrichor". Well captured delightful scene. A fave.
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Date: 3/31/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thy heart flooded out ink that awed this old man. Truly exceptional verses my friend.. Super 7 and a fav...
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Date: 3/8/2017 6:25:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Date: 3/5/2017 11:03:00 PM
A wonderful, creative personification !! Superbly crafted! Congrats, Jo :)
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Date: 3/3/2017 10:19:00 PM
You have been very creative with this one. The poem is drenched in pleasures of romance. A 7 and a fav.
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:22:00 AM
Ohhh, how wonderful this is. What a beautifully done personification :)
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Date: 2/27/2017 8:31:00 AM
Love the personification, now I look forward to the romance continuing, they will surely meet again, after all he gave her a rainbow promise ring. Congrats on a fine write, (I think one of your best)!
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Date: 2/27/2017 7:52:00 AM
A beautifully written poem, Jo. Enjoyed reading. T.J
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Date: 2/26/2017 10:50:00 PM
JO beautifully penned and I loved your drip drip drip!
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Date: 2/25/2017 5:34:00 PM
Beautifully written personification, Jo. I love this...a FAVE! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2017 3:46:00 PM
Loving the rain as much as I do I really enjoyed this beautiful poem Jo! (It should be listed under personification instead of Free verse though). I loved it! A fave for me! 7 ; )
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Date: 2/25/2017 9:12:00 AM
Love the creativity and sentience in this great poem and congrats!:-)
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Date: 2/25/2017 5:39:00 AM
Very creative way of describing a rain storm..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2017 10:19:00 PM
Beautiful lines, Jo. Congrats :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 2:15:00 PM
Love how you personified them Jo..Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/24/2017 7:55:00 AM
Wonderful gem Jo, congratulations...
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Date: 2/24/2017 6:42:00 AM
Astonishing...gem of a poem, you have written, Jo. Congratulations! A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:55:00 PM
Very good :-) congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:38:00 PM
So many kinds of sweetness, Jo. : ) This is a great poem. Extra bonus for "petrichor" - I love that word. As we reach toward the end of a northern hemisphere winter, it seems all the better.
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:57:00 PM
so beautiful Jo!!! A heart warmer indeed :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/24/2017 1:07:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo:) all glory be to God alone:)
Date: 2/23/2017 7:56:00 AM
Yes, nicely done, Jo. Your talent shines brightly in this piece:)
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