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Rainbow, Arch, Rainbow Colors

Sometimes we make a promise we forget. You said it but it simply slipped your mind and then you tell someone of your regret but they just aren't the forgiving kind. So, what does this teach us about our life? We should never make a promise we can’t keep and that promises are often cause for strife, a broken pledge to leave a heart to weep. So, should we make these promises at all if breaking them leads to disastrous end. They are commitments that we must recall or risk the chance of losing love and friend. The promise on which most should still rely comes from the Heavenly Father up above, like a rainbow in the miracle of sky. It is the promise of his devoted love. 6/2/2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(2) Brian Strand, Sponsor

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Date: 6/6/2020 1:07:00 PM
Love your words and the beautiful message to remember. Congratulations on your win Janis :)
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:35:00 AM
Lovely poem.. Nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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