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Rainbow

That night was the end of Jim’s career warned he carried a vicious left hook, an able-bodied man from Kashmir read Jim’s weakness like an info book. Yet Jim took him to the second round and was leading by a single point, but when over confident he found let him through his guard and rocked the joint. Jim didn’t hear the Referee’s count when victim to a rapid combo, just stars as city lights from the mount as he groped for his mouth shield; Rainbow. © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Date: 11/18/2018 8:35:00 AM
Hi Harry, This is such a unique take on the contest Harry. I am sure Craig said he didn't want the usual cliches on the rainbow. You have followed through with an excellent write my friend. Loved the content. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/10/2018 6:28:00 PM
Just back to say hello. I noticed i had seen all your recent poems . Let me check out just one more but it's a Ku, so I am sure i read it. i would never miss your haiku!!
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Date: 11/4/2018 1:18:00 PM
Great to read a unique poem ... I apologize I have been MIA; missing. Anil
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Date: 11/2/2018 6:29:00 PM
I agree with Arthur, this is so original and creative! Very well done, harry
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Date: 11/1/2018 7:12:00 PM
Poor Jim. It sounds like he will be seeing stars and many colors of the rainbow- for a while. Your thoughts did bring a smile. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/31/2018 6:22:00 AM
What I love about this, is how creative and original it is, great poetry!
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Date: 10/29/2018 4:05:00 PM
Never had that rainbow interpretation... very nice.
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Date: 10/29/2018 7:25:00 AM
Very well rendered my friend...ready for a win, Harry...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/28/2018 9:50:00 PM
G'day Harry ... nicely written and rhymed Harry. In boxing, there's always one better somewhere - thanks Mate - Lindsay
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Date: 10/28/2018 6:18:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. and very creative too. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/27/2018 6:43:00 PM
What an unexpected and unusual approach to the contest theme, Harry! I really liked this...so creative! Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 10/27/2018 5:29:00 PM
that is a different kind of rainbow he saw. Nice one, it will win for originality I'm sure, Have a great evening
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Date: 10/27/2018 1:38:00 AM
Love your take on the contest theme Harry. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 10/26/2018 11:13:00 PM
As a great boxing fan, I particularly like this one. Very nice write, Champ.
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Date: 10/26/2018 10:31:00 PM
a left, a right,a left, a right to throw a hook punch and uppercut Punch, I would hear my father say when he would sit and watch boxing.. good write, Harry, luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/26/2018 5:58:00 PM
This is most definitely the only poem in the contest that paints beyond ordinary description of a rainbow. Kudos for your originality. Best for a win, Harry.
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