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Doesn't everyone steal love to fill some hole the feel they have never needed a raincoat with her never noticed the rain Oh choking on the unintangibles Juggling mist Love is that pause between our lips meet

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Date: 6/14/2020 6:36:00 PM
'never noticed the rain' tells it all. Nicely penned, Christopher! Cheers, Gershon
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 6/15/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/13/2020 2:03:00 PM
Hello Christopher Quigley, you created a lovely poem. It reads as a love poem. Well done. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 10:04:00 AM
Hello Christopher Quigley, you are welcome. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 6/13/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you

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