Rain On the River

Mist rises from the mountains and meets
rain clouds spilling down the canyon.

Fish ducks fly up river, their
breasts just skimming the water.

The heron stands in the shallows, his
neck arched, looking deep into the riffle.

Fish rise to feed in the cool water; the
river otters play on the grey rocks.


Rain drops like diamonds on the surface
of the water; peaceful moments on the river.



Just returned from a fishing trip on the Klamath River
in northern Ca. Glorious!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Barbara, congratulations on this great featured poem, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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November 7, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Now you did it! With such picturesque words I'm getting that wanderlust I had as a sailor. Congrats on having this one featured. Vince
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Sounds like a beautiful and refreshing place to be and fish. Congratulations on this being featured this week. Keep writing. Sara
Pickett Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Wonderful journey, breathtaking, like I was there... Kudos on the feature, you are deserving.....:JP]
Fraser Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week Barbara >> James
Richards Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 7:57 AM
I must have missed this one when first submitted, so I'm glad to see it here on the featured page this week. Reminds me of wonderful times we have had on the Klamath River. Congratulations, Barbara....loved the poem, and love that Oregon river and the beauty within!
Brown Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Barbara. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 2, 2009 at 12:36 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week BG Rgds Brian
Cameron Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 7:03 AM
dear barbara, pure and beautiful, evokes times gone by for me, barbara cameron
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September 14, 2009 at 10:08 PM
a gem...a jewel indeed--Charma
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September 10, 2009 at 6:31 PM
Glorious is an understatement for the quality of this work, Barbara! I feel like I was with you watching and experiencing everything you describe. Magnificent! To my faves! Love, Carolyn
Gass Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 7:56 AM
Beautiful images, Barbara. Thank you for sharing this. I have missed so much and am looking forward to catching up! Love, Robin
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September 9, 2009 at 2:27 PM
My Dearest Beloved BARBARA, I LOVE YOU SOUP MAIL...Only YOURS...Harry
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September 9, 2009 at 1:43 PM
My Dearest Beloved Barbara,One of my favorite pastimes Did Jordan catch anything I Have not changed my E-mail-- [email protected] Please try again LOVE FOREVER and ALWAYS...Harry Please read my new POEM it may answer some of YOUR Concerns about me not Writting for awhile I still LOVE YOU...Harry
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 12:25 PM
just teaming with life! beautiful imagery! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 5:23 AM
Beautiful Barbara. Welcome home. Loved the peacefulness of this poem. Clears the mind. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Lovely poem Barbara, hope you caught plenty>>James
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 11:48 AM
Quite, reflective, and relaxing. I can see the place and the play. Sara
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